Mike Ford wrote:
On 06 February 2004 17:40, Mehdi Achour wrote:


@@ -115,8 +115,8 @@
<simpara>
So far, we have only covered the work of reading element names
and their values. SimpleXML can also access element
attributes. - Access attributes of an element just as you would elements of
- an <type>array</type>.
+ Access attributes of an element just as you would
access elements
+ of an <type>array</type>.
</simpara>


Sorry, but this is one where the original was better English.  Although the
additional "access" is not syntactically incorrect, it makes the sentence
read awkwardly and I doubt many native English speakers would include it.

I thought this sentence was missing something :) What about "just as you would do it for the elements of an <type>array</type>" ?


Tank you for your correction anyway !

didou - french fries

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