Thanks for fixing these. Remind me to buy you a beer for 3234.
Just grammatical nits from me:
pkg.1.txt:
- line 271 & 272: Would you be alright with re-writing the portion
after the comma as:
choose a new unique identifier that identifies this image to its
authority
- line 286 & 287: This is currently written as:
"If a specific authorities are requested, ..."
I would re-write this as one of the following:
If a specific authority is requested, ...
or
If specific authorities are requested, ...
Since you probably want the authorities at the end of the sentence to
agree with the one at the beginning, I suppose the plural case works
better. Of course, you could always change the end of the sentence,
too.
The rest looks good.
Thanks,
-j
On Fri, Oct 31, 2008 at 04:13:09PM -0700, Brock Pytlik wrote:
> Webrev:
> http://cr.opensolaris.org/~bpytlik/ips-3234-v1/
>
> Bugs:
> http://defect.opensolaris.org/bz/show_bug.cgi?id=4384
> Usage and man page options don't match
>
> http://defect.opensolaris.org/bz/show_bug.cgi?id=3234
> pkg(1) man page doesn't mention mirror options for set-authority
>
> Thanks,
> Brock
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