Stephen Hahn wrote:
Looking for some feedback on
http://cr.opensolaris.org/~sch/pkg-man/
man/pkg.5.txt:
line 74: s/certain/specific/ to avoid using certain twice?
lines 129-135: perhaps a note about that original name needing to be
maintained across all versions (I seem to recall, Bart mentioned something)?
lines 362-363: given Bart's comments, it seems as though incorrectly
specified actuators may not necessarily result in package installation
failure, depending on what your definition of "package installation
failure" is.
line 373: s/installation on a clone/operation using a clone/ (I
suggest this because you have 'on a clone' instead of 'in a clone')
line 374: s/currently// (doesn't live imply current?)
lines 367-379: it seems as though the actuator names should be
indented given line 365. In addition, the text describing each could be
on a new line underneath the name of each, also suitably indented.
lines 376-379: i would put all of these on one line, comma-separated,
in combination with the above suggestion
lines 379-390: it isn't clear from the text that actuator execution
occurs for *all* packages (actions) at the beginning or ending of plan
execution as opposed to as each package is installed or removed. That
subtle point might be lost on those attempting to abuse the system.
--
Shawn Walker
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