Padraig,
This needs changed:
22 - Add and modify and modify publishers. --> to
22 - Add and modify packages and modify publishers.
I think that we should mention pfexec and I think a bug should be raised
against the pkg man page to do the same. Running from the command line
without pfexec is pretty unusable, unless you are using a local test
image, you may also want to mention that.
- Perhaps you want to talk somewhere about invoking packagemanager with
enough privilege to operate on an image you (as a normal user) don't
own?
Other than that looks good to me.
JR
Padraig O'Briain wrote:
We have noticed that /usr/bin/updatemanager is delivered by
SUNWupdatemgr so we need to change the name of /usr/bin/updatemanager.
The new webrev http://cr.opensolaris.org/~padraig/ips-7645-v7/
in addition to fixing
7645 Man page required for Package Manager and Update Manager
also fixes
7842 updatemanager name clash
Padraig
On 04/01/09 08:29, Padraig O'Briain wrote:
Danek,
Thanks for your comments.
New webrev is at http://cr.opensolaris.org/~padraig/ips-7645-v6/.
On 03/31/09 16:59, Danek Duvall wrote:
On Tue, Mar 31, 2009 at 03:33:39PM +0100, Padraig O'Briain wrote:
http://cr.opensolaris.org/~padraig/ips-7645-v5/
packagemanager.1.txt:
- line 10: "hRUi" -> "hiRU" or "RUhi".
- line 41: "Update all packages in the specified boot environment." What
If the user chooses Update All menu or toolbar option in
packagemanager and SUNWipkg or SUNWipkg-gui needs to be updated
before proceeding with image update packagemanager reinvokes itself
with this option after updating those packages to proceed with the
image update.
is the second sentence trying to say?
- line 46: Is it "info_install" or "info-install"? Is this option
needed, anyway, because of the form on line 12? This paragraph should
come before line 36, to be in alphabetical order (by short option).
If you want to use a .p5i file with other options you need to use
this option.
- line 55: "ion" -> "on". Space before "/aux0".
- line 57: "aux09" -> "aux0".
- line 73: "var" -> "/var". "mainted" -> "maintained".
- line 74: "start" -> "start-up".
- line 88: add "pkg(5)" as well.
- You don't need to capitalize "publisher" every time.
- Perhaps you want to talk somewhere about invoking packagemanager with
enough privilege to operate on an image you (as a normal user) don't
own?
I had considered this but I did not see any reference to this in
pkg(1) man page so I thought it did not to be mentioned.
updatemanager.1.txt:
- line 32: Same comment here as on line 41 of packagemanager.1.
- line 45: "aux09" -> "aux0"
- line 71: reference "pkg(5)", too.
Why do you have changes to packagemanager.py and updatemanager.py in this
wad?
When preparing these man pages I found some options which we needed
to remove and some did not work properly so those changes were to
make to code behave as described in the man pages.
Danek
Padraig
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