Stephen Hahn wrote:
  I've spent a bit of time cleaning up some of the manual page bugs
  we've accumulated in the past dev phase.  Please have a look at

  http://cr.opensolaris.org/~sch/pkg-man/

  and let me know what still needs work.

  Thanks
  Stephen

pkgdepend.1.txt:
91-105: The multi-command examples seemed to have gotten smushed together. If that's how it's supposed to be, ok, but it seems nearly unreadble that way.

pkg.1.txt:
8-64: I'd suggest some reordering of these lines (and perhaps the corresponding ones that come out from pkg --help). I think image-update should be next to install and uninstall. image-create should move down, perhaps to just above the history line, or maybe even to just above the version line. The publisher commands should probably move up, I'd suggest to just above the variant settings. Finally, the group of commands from lines 14-21 should perhaps be alphabetized?

Thanks,
Brock
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