Danek Duvall wrote:
Stephen Hahn wrote:

* Stephen Hahn <[email protected]> [2010-02-03 23:54]:
  I've spent a bit of time cleaning up some of the manual page bugs
  we've accumulated in the past dev phase.  Please have a look at

  http://cr.opensolaris.org/~sch/pkg-man/

  and let me know what still needs work.
  I've updated the webrev based on the earlier feedback.  Any more
  comments are welcome.

There's repetitive text in the FILES sections of packagemanager.1, pkg.1,
and pkg.5.  Should the first two simply reference the third, or is it
acceptable to repeat like this?

Any interest in taking on 12002, 12809, and/or 12890?  Those are the ones
remaining that don't require a bunch of new text.

packagemanager.1.txt:

  - Do we actually typically use pfexec, or gksu?

The command used to launch PM from the menu is:

gksu dbus-launch /usr/bin/packagemanager

JR
pkg.1.txt:

  - examples have column alignment issues, in some cases worse than before.

pkgmogrify.1.txt:

  - line 57: "specfied" -> "specified"

  - line 81ff: reflow paragraph?

pkgsend.1.txt:

  - "w/" -> "with"?

Danek
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