Package: bluedevil
Version: 1.2.2-1
Severity: minor

The extended description contains:

  * A daemon to listen incoming requests, for example to receive files
    or to introduce a requested PIN.

Something's wrong in "A daemon to listen incoming requests". This could read "A daemon to listen to incoming requests", or "A daemon listening to incoming requests" (less "to"-s).
Or, perhaps more simply, "A daemon to receive requests".

By the way, at the end of an enumeration, please use *either* etcetera or an ellipsis, not both (unless the meaning is that there are "many many" more items).

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