On 9/11/13 8:06 PM, Joseph Yee wrote:
> 
> On Wed, Sep 4, 2013 at 3:25 AM, Yoshiro YONEYA
> <[email protected] <mailto:[email protected]>> wrote:
> 
>     Dear all,
> 
>     This is reminder.  WG LC will end next week.
>     Please review the document and give your feedback.
> 
>     Regards,
> 
>     -- Marc & Yoneya, co-chairs
> 
>     On Wed, 28 Aug 2013 15:46:03 +0900 Yoshiro YONEYA
>     <[email protected] <mailto:[email protected]>> wrote:
> 
>     > Dear all,
>     >
>     > This message starts two weeks Working Group Last Call (WGLC) on
>     > draft-ietf-precis-framework-09.txt (PRECIS Framework: Preparation and
>     > Comparison of Internationalized Strings in Application Protocols).
>     >
>     > Please review the document and send comments to the list
>     ([email protected] <mailto:[email protected]>),
>     > the co-chairs ([email protected]
>     <mailto:[email protected]>), or the authors
>     > ([email protected]
>     <mailto:[email protected]>) by the end of WGLC.
>     >
>     > The WGLC will end on Wednesday, Sep 11th.
>     >
> 
> 
> Reviewed the draft, think the approach is good.  Just one minor comment.
> 
> Same as Florian, had the 'hmm' reaction when reading about
> directionality and application behaviour at Section 3.1.  It seems that
> the only application behaviour is permitted pattern.  It doesn't deal
> with visual appearance I believed.  Maybe replace 'application
> behaviour' with 'permitted patther of the string' (or 'allowed
> combination of the string')?

Hmm, I see why you and Florian don't like that text. :-)

How about this?

OLD
   Directionality:  defines application behavior in the presence of code
      points that have directionality, in particular right-to-left code
      points as defined in the Unicode database (see [UAX9]).

NEW
   Directionality:  defines which strings are to be considered
      left-to-right (LTR) and right-to-left (RTL), and the allowable
      sequences of characters in LTR and RTL strings.

Peter

-- 
Peter Saint-Andre
https://stpeter.im/


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