On 2013/10/09 5:55, Peter Saint-Andre wrote:
On 9/11/13 8:06 PM, Joseph Yee wrote:

Reviewed the draft, think the approach is good.  Just one minor comment.

Same as Florian, had the 'hmm' reaction when reading about
directionality and application behaviour at Section 3.1.  It seems that
the only application behaviour is permitted pattern.  It doesn't deal
with visual appearance I believed.  Maybe replace 'application
behaviour' with 'permitted patther of the string' (or 'allowed
combination of the string')?

Hmm, I see why you and Florian don't like that text. :-)

How about this?

OLD
    Directionality:  defines application behavior in the presence of code
       points that have directionality, in particular right-to-left code
       points as defined in the Unicode database (see [UAX9]).

NEW
    Directionality:  defines which strings are to be considered
       left-to-right (LTR) and right-to-left (RTL), and the allowable
       sequences of characters in LTR and RTL strings.

That may be an improvement, but it's missing the fact that LTR and RTL strings are the only two alternatives allowed.

Also, it would be good to somewhere say that there is currently no widely accepted and implemented solution for the display of constructs with mixed pieces (e.g. domain names with LTR and RTL components (labels), because the problem is inherently extremely hard.

Regards,   Martin.
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