On 2/11/15 6:40 PM, Peter Saint-Andre - &yet wrote:
On 2/11/15 2:33 PM, Pete Resnick wrote:

I think it's good up until the last sentence, which is convoluted. But the tone is right and we might even want to borrow some text from Section 3 of RFC 5895. ;-)

A possible refactoring...

OLD
   If a profile
   really needs to specify a directionality rule, unless a great deal of
   careful research into the problems of displaying bidirectional text
   is done (which is outside of the scope of this framework), this
   document generally recommends using the  "Bidi Rule" from [RFC5893]
   for profiles based on IdentifierClass, and for profiles based on
   FreeformClass or other situations in which IdentifierClass is not
   appropriate, that consideration be given to using UAX #9 directly.

NEW
   The authors of a profile might think that they need to define a new
   directionality rule of their own.  This is not a good idea, even if
   the authors have done a great deal of careful research into the
   problems of displaying bidirectional text.  Instead, this document
   recommends the following:

   o For profiles based on the IdentifierClass, it is best to use the
     "Bidi Rule" from the IDNA2008 specification on right-to-left
     scripts [RFC5893].

   o For profiles based on FreeformClass (or in situations where
     IdentifierClass is not appropriate), it is best to follow the
     recommendations of Unicode Standard Annex #9 [UAX9] directly.

This misses an essential bit: The original sentence *does not* recommend using 5893 or UAX9, where your refactoring does. What I presented says, "*If* you think you need a directionality rule (and you probably don't), *then* use 5893 or UAX9." And even then, it says that if you're basing on IdentifierClass *and* you really need a directionality rule, we *generally* recommend 5893. If you're using FreeformClass *and* you think (for some completely insane reason) that you need a special directionality rule, you should give *consideration* to UAX9.

If you want to refactor but still capture that, I'm OK.

pr

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