Yes, I noticed I didn't have the verb, "improve", in the past tense, after I saw it "posted", but then it's too late. I tend to mess around with some sentences until they say exactly what I intend, but often fail to follow the any changes all the way through the sentence. <g>.
Regards, LelandJ John Harvey wrote: > It would have "improved" the sentence. > > -----Original Message----- > From: [EMAIL PROTECTED] [mailto:[EMAIL PROTECTED] On Behalf > Of Leland F. Jackson, CPA > Sent: Monday, July 21, 2008 11:53 AM > To: ProFox Email List > Subject: Re: [OT] VW Researcher Pours Cold Water on Electric Car Dream > > Nicholas Geti wrote: > >> ----- Original Message ----- >> From: "Paul Hill" <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> >> To: "ProFox Email List" <[email protected]> >> Sent: Sunday, July 20, 2008 2:17 PM >> Subject: Re: [OT] VW Researcher Pours Cold Water on Electric Car Dream >> >> >> >> >>> On Sun, Jul 20, 2008 at 6:45 PM, Leland F. Jackson, CPA >>> <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote: >>> >>> >>>> 2) Hybrids are two expensive for what they deliver making a petrol or >>>> natural gas vehicle an overall better value. >>>> >>>> 3) Hybrids are two complex; because, they use two separate engine >>>> systems that must be integrated together. >>>> >>>> 4) Hybrids are two light for any kind of work, like pulling a boat to >>>> the lake, or hauling trash to the city dump, for example. >>>> >>>> >>> I think you mean. 'too' :-) >>> >>> -- >>> Paul >>> >>> >> Also "integrated" not integrated together" >> >> > > Yes, that would have improve the sentence. > > Regards, > > LelandJ > > > >> [excessive quoting removed by server] _______________________________________________ Post Messages to: [email protected] Subscription Maintenance: http://leafe.com/mailman/listinfo/profox OT-free version of this list: http://leafe.com/mailman/listinfo/profoxtech Searchable Archive: http://leafe.com/archives/search/profox This message: http://leafe.com/archives/byMID/profox/[EMAIL PROTECTED] ** All postings, unless explicitly stated otherwise, are the opinions of the author, and do not constitute legal or medical advice. This statement is added to the messages for those lawyers who are too stupid to see the obvious.
