1. c. footnotes below each table
2. b. about right
3. b. about right
4. c. like it
5. d. yes, and I would like to see names added for the adverb
6. b. both

Have a wide landscape version as though one would print it on a foldable
card.


On Thu, Aug 4, 2022 at 4:27 PM Jan-Pieter Jacobs <janpieter.jac...@gmail.com>
wrote:

> Good job!
>
> I answered the poll in-line below:
>
> Op do 4 aug. 2022 om 17:02 schreef Henry Rich <henryhr...@gmail.com>:
>
> > 1. In each document, look at a couple of tables with a footnote, and
> > refer to the footnotes.  Which layout did you find easiest to use?
> > c. footnotes below each table (easier for on-screen viewing, where I'd
> use
> > it most).
> >
> > 2. What do you think of the size of the main text?
> > b. about right
> >
> > 3. What do you think of the size of the footnote text?
> > b. about right
> >
> > 4. What do you think of the coloration (indicating part of speech)?
> > c. like it (but I'd double check with a colour-blind person whether it's
> > recognisable / legible)
> >
> > 5. Consider the two tables 'Adverbs' and 'Conjunctions'.  The adverb
> > table has a column of menmonic names, the conjunction table does not.
> > Are the names helpful?
> > d. yes, and I would like to see names added for the conjunctions
> >
> > 6. In the Foreigns table, would you prefer to see the system-defined
> > name in addition to/instead of the m!:n value?
> > a. m!:n only
> >
> > 7. Do you have suggestions for formatting?  Write them in.
> >
> >
> 0) +1 for landscape mode!
>
> 1) I find it slightly confusing that the footnotes are not in order of
> appearance (the first one on the page is 17), and there are some footnotes
> that appear to be out of sync, but I bet this will be ironed out in the
> final version :).
>
> 2) The arguments table could benefit from a L/R column, there seems to be
> space available for this.
>
> 3) I'm still missing some verbs, but I don't know whether you're (in the
> long run) going for completeness.
>
> 4) The modifier train table takes up a lot of space... I recently
> summarised it for myself as follows by bunching together like cases (I hope
> it comes through, best read in fixed-width font):
>
> Train      | Type     | Result
> --------------------------
> [N] V N    | noun      | apply verb monad [dyad]
> [NV]V V    | verb      | hook [fork]
> ACV V CV   | adv/conj  | fork after applying AC. note: *no A V C*
> A  A  V    | conj      |  (u A)  (*v* A) V   ; fork if verbs produced
> AC A  [A]  | adv/conj  | ((u AC [v]) A) [A]; apply advs/conjs in order
> NV C  NV   | any       | apply C to produce any part of speech
> NV C  AC   | adv/conj  | NV C (u AC [v])
> AC C  NV   | adv/conj  | (u AC [v]) C NV
> AC C  A    | conj      | (u AC [v]) C (*v* A)
> AC C  C    | conj      | (u AC [v]) C (u C v)
> NV A       | any       | apply A to NV
> NV C / C NV| adv       | bind to C, partial application
> A V        | adv       | (u A) V
> A C        | adv       | (u A) C *u* adverbial hook (e.g. ]: C)
> C0 C1      | conj      | (u C0 v) (u C1 v)
> (foot)Notes:
> - AVCN always remain in the result in the order they were in the train
> - A and C can take N or V-> any, so e.g. CC can be verb application instead
> of a hook: 2 (&[.) + is 4
> - AC is adv hook, opposite order of verb hook (and only 'monad')
> - monad to adverb: (]. [.) e.g. (].[.)> is an adverb opening its left arg
>
> I highlighted in the above with ** what I consider to be less intuitive
> combinations. Maybe it's of use if you'd like to reduce the size of the
> modifier train table.
>
> 5) In the adverb table, the dyadic case of x m&u y -> m&u^:x y is missing,
> and could easily be added as an optional part (as for e.g. ^:). Also, I
> think that u@n should be rendered as u@(n"_); u n would seem to imply that
> the verb is already executed.
>
> 6) Links to NuVoC for each primitive would also be nice for a final
> version, so one can click through for a longer description if needed (when
> used on a computer).
>
> All that said, great job, it looks very pretty.
>
> Keep up the good work,
> Jan-Pieter
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