Hello Mark, good times. So did you play any of the instruments in that arangement? The musical arangement is well done, your vocals are ok, it just seems like you could loosen up a little. I bet when your singing that same song without a mic in front of you you let it rip and roar. So, as for any thoughts of how to improve it, I think the vocals are sitting on top of the music a little too much, either you could pull the vocals down a tad, or compress or both. I myself would definatly compress the vocals more, at least a 3 to 1 and go up from there with a fast atack on a faster paist song like that and dig into the thresh hold.
Take care
----- Original Message ----- From: "Mark Gilland" <[email protected]>
To: <[email protected]>
Sent: Sunday, September 22, 2013 5:48 AM
Subject: Probably not the greatest, but tell me what you all think.


OK, I'll admit, this might not be the best, but I am definitely open for suggestions on how to get things more pollished. I'd be curious though not only for you to point out the bad parts, but also to tell me the points that you do really like, if any. I'd like to get both sides.

This was put together just this morning in ProTools. I'll admit I didn't really spend much time on this, so I probab ly could have gotten it more pollished, but for only 5 takes on the vocal, plus the arrangement I did with the instrumentation, I think it actually came out quite well, all considered. You can hear the recording by visiting:

http://boo.fm/b1615015

Plwease let me know what you all think. Again, I want both the things that really could be done to make this shine a bit more, as well as to know the things you really did find worked really well for me.

Chris.
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