A small comment. It's probably best to use the OED for English dictionary words 
rather than a google search: 
http://www.askoxford.com/results/?view=dict&freesearch=immersive&branch=13842570&textsearchtype=exact


David.

-----Original Message-----
From: [email protected] [mailto:[email protected]] On 
Behalf Of timeless
Sent: 10 March 2010 08:55
To: Robin Berjon
Cc: public-webapps WG
Subject: Re: VMMF — new version

On Thu, Mar 4, 2010 at 3:13 PM, Robin Berjon <[email protected]> wrote:
> I just produced an update of VMMF to make it ready for publication: 
> http://dev.w3.org/2006/waf/widgets-vmmf/.
>
> Essentially I changed it so that it corresponds to CSS Media Queries. That, 
> plus it being a UI oriented specification, means that there's only one 
> normative assertion and it's a SHOULD.
>
> Comments welcome, I think that this baby can ship.

Just to be difficult, i object to maximized being misspelled by an
old-worlder. I'd suggest "max" or "maxed" as a compromise :)

>  widgets that have no chrome and that therefore could masquerade some other 
> existing objects on the screen.

s/therefore could/could therefore/

> (e.g. tool bars, title bars, menus, etc.).
> (e.g. the menu bar, the clock and similar icons, the system menu, etc.).

the use of 'e.g.' is generally incompatible with 'etc.'

>    The view mode is the manner in which a widget is presented to a user that 
> corresponds to the metaphors and functionalities in use on a given

functionality [N-UNCOUNT]

>    Describes a widget providing a more immersive interface,

Google says that "immersive" isn't in their dictionary, Firefox
concurs. Oh well, the web and its 3 million hits evolves to provide
such terms.

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