Here are the difficulties I'm having understanding the new (very complex) 
Ballot 202 definitions shown below.  I can't imagine explaining this to our 
engineering and vetting teams, and I think people will make mistakes.  Assuming 
these definitions parse out, at a bare minimum we should give easy examples for 
each definition.  These are arranged in a logical order, not alphabetically.

Also - we won't really know if these definitions are good and useful unless we 
compare them to the new text of BR 3.2.2.4, which defines how we are to do 
validation.  Last week when we pulled back Ballot 190 it was to allow Peter 
time to tune up the definition of Authorized Domain Name in Ballot 190 the 
context of BR 3.2.2.4 (so we could remove the Notes that had been added to 
Ballot 190), but to my surprise, the new definitions have shown up in Ballot 
202 instead - I think that's a mistake.

As recently as July 4, Ben said this Ballot 202 would cover the following four 
subjects: (1) adds dnQualifier as an allowed attribute for all certificate 
types (including DV), (2) adds ASN.1 info on the EV jurisdiction attribute 
types, (3) adds language to the EV guidelines to clarify that CAs may limit 
their aggregate liabilities, (4) allows underscores in domain names and 
clarifies what can go in common names.  Why did the authors decide to include 
changes to crucial definitions applicable to domain validation at the same 
time, but not allow discussion in a pre-ballot?
At this point, Entrust is inclined to vote no - not because we necessarily 
oppose the ballot's aims, but because there are some questions and no time to 
resolve them before voting starts.

Here are our concerns about the new definitions.  Again, it would be nice to 
have more time to discuss, and not start voting on Wednesday.

Domain Label: An individual component of a Domain Name.

[What does this mean - "component"?  Is a period a Domain Label?  A couple of 
letters?  This seems circular with the Domain Name definition below.  Did you 
mean "node" and not "component"?  At a minimum, give examples - "In 
mail.example.com, the components are "mail", "example", and "com".  The period 
"." is not a component, nor are characters that are less than a full node such 
as "exa".]

Domain Name:  A set of one or more Domain Labels, each separated by a single 
full stop character (".").  Fully-Qualified Domain Names and Wildcard Domain 
Names are Domain Names.

[Again, somewhat circular - Domain Label says it's a component of a Domain 
Name, and Domain Name says it's made up of Domain Labels... never fully defined.

Also, saying that FQDNs and Wildcard DNs are DNs might work, but need to study 
the rest of the text.

Also, this definition does not require a domain name to end in a gTLD or ccTLD, 
so server1.mail qualifies as a Domain Name?  Might cause trouble with other 
definitions.]

Domain Namespace:  The set of all possible Domain Names that are subordinate to 
a single node in the Domain Name System.

[Unclear - "subordinate to a single node in the Domain Name System".  So for 
server1.mail.example.com, is "com" part of the Domain Namespace, or only 
server1.mail.example?  Also, you say in the definition of Domain Name that an 
FQDN is a Domain Name, so under the Definition of Domain Namespace, is the 
entire FQDN (including .com) meant to be subordinate to a single node in the 
Domain Name System?  Would that require server1.mail.example.com.com, with the 
second ".com" being the single node?

In the example server1.mail.example.com, "server1" and "mail" are subordinate 
to "example", so does that mean "server1.mail" is a Domain Namespace that is 
subordinate to the node "example"?

Also - we never use Domain Namespace in the rest of the definitions.  Where is 
it used, and does this definition make sense there?]

Fully-Qualified Domain Name:  A Domain Name that includes the Domain Labels of 
all superior nodes in the Internet Domain Name System.

[Again unclear.  The reference to "all superior nodes" begs the question - 
superior to what?  A gTLD or ccTLD?  In the example server1.mail.example.com, 
is "server1.mail.example" itself an FQDN, because it includes all "superior 
nodes" to .com?  Or did you mean to include .com as well to make it an FQDN?]

Wildcard Domain Name: A Domain Name consisting of a single asterisk character 
("*") followed by a single full stop character (".") followed by a 
Fully-Qualified Domain Name.

[This is confusing because it starts with Domain Name, then talks about an FQDN 
- the "*" itself doesn't turn a Domain Name into an FQDN so why are you using 
both terms? ]

Base Domain Name: The portion of an applied-for Domain Name that is the first 
domain name node left of a registry-controlled or public suffix plus the 
registry-controlled or public suffix (e.g. "example.co.uk" or "example.com").
For Domain Names where the right-most domain name node is a gTLD having ICANN 
Specification 13 in its registry agreement, the gTLD itself may be used as the 
Base Domain Name.

[Ballot 190 stripped out "requested" in front of FQDN wherever it existed, as 
it seems to get into a CA's business processes - what the customer requests, as 
opposed to a domain the CA decides to validate - and adds nothing but 
confusion.  I recall discussion that used the word "requested" to limit what a 
CA could do - e.g., using "requested" might limit CA so they could only verify 
an FQDN the customer "requested" (server1.mail.example.com) and not the FQDN 
the CA wanted to verify to fill the customer's order (example.com).  Now we see 
the words "applied for" - take it out, it's not relevant and could restrict 
what CAs can do.]

Authorization Domain Name: The Domain Name used to obtain authorization for 
certificate issuance for a given Domain Name.
The CA may use the FQDN returned from a DNS CNAME lookup as the Domain Name for 
the purposes of domain validation.
If the Domain Name is a Wildcard Domain Name, then the CA MUST remove "*." from 
the left most portion of requested Domain Name.
The CA may prune zero or more labels from left to right until encountering a 
Base Domain Name and may use any one of the intermediate values for the purpose 
of domain validation.

[First, the word "authorization" does not seem correct - validation (used in BR 
3.2.2.4) might make more sense.  A simple WhoIs lookup by itself doesn't seem 
like authorization, only validation of a request.

The first sentence is somewhat circular by using Domain Name twice in one 
sentence.  The Domain Name used... for a given Domain Name.  ??

Assuming that server1.mail is a Domain Name, can it be an Authorization Domain 
Name for something?

The second sentence again goes from FQDN to Domain Name - not clear why.

The third sentence again talks about the "requested Domain Name" - requested by 
the customer?  Please remove "requested".  Also, why are you saying the * must 
be removed - do you mean to add something at the end of the sentence like 
"before the validation is obtained", or "before a certificate is issued", or..? 
 I don't understand the purpose of this sentence in this definition.

The final sentence is unclear as to what domain name is being pruned - the 
Authorization Domain Name?  (The sentence is in that definition.)  Or is the 
requested domain name being pruned (probably).  This might be one place where 
it makes sense to use "requested" simply to show a CA can choose to prune and 
then validate what's left.  But why is this rule in the definition of 
Authorization Domain Name?  Shouldn't it be in BR 3.2.2.4 itself?]
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