> Any help you could provide would be appreciated.

Please use unified diffs in the future.

I'm -0 on this patch; it still has the negative, cautionary-patronizing
tone ("Do not", "can be tricky", "be mindful"), as if readers are unable
to grasp the description that they just read (and indeed, in the patch,
you claim that readers *are* unable to understand how command lines
work). I know that Raymond Hettinger is very much opposed to this style
of documentation. So I, whose native language is not English, cannot
approve/apply this patch. Try convincing Raymond.

Regards,
Martin
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