Oh, well... so much for proof reading....

I wrote:
"I, one of your patient's daughters, is being directly discriminated against..."

But, in any wonder why kids can't write correctly, this science teacher (not English, thank God) meant to change:

"I am being directly discriminated against..."
             OR
"I, one of your patient's daughters, am being directly discriminated against..."
             OR
"One of your patient's daughters is being directly discriminated against..."

... and I just couldn't words my together get order in.

regards, Best
doT

(end o' the day)
 
 

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