rest of us who sometimes fail to take time for proofing.
How many daughters does your addressee have anyway?
Do the daughters have names?
You might have written simply: “Your patient’s daughter
Gwendolyn, is the innocent object of direct discrimination.”
That way, you’ll come across twice as “think” as some people
“dumb” you are.”
Boyd :-)
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On 9/13/04 7:42 PM, "Tod E. Santee"
<[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote:
Oh, well... so much for proof reading....
I wrote:
"I, one of your patient's daughters, is being directly discriminated against..."
But, in any wonder why kids can't write correctly, this science teacher (not English, thank God) meant to change:
"I am being directly discriminated against..."
OR
"I, one of your patient's daughters, am being directly discriminated against..."
OR
"One of your patient's daughters is being directly discriminated against..."
... and I just couldn't words my together get order in.
regards, Best
doT
(end o' the day)
