Bobbie, I like the original better.  Dan T.

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     Hi All
         OK, I rewrote this. let me know if it's any better. Thanks guys  ~ 
Bobbie ~
   
                                           A Love That Inspires
                                               by Bobbie Humphreys
   
            Imagine a kind of love that inspires spontaneous slow dancing. A 
daily
   routine interrupted by a Nat King Cole love song.
     “…the greatest thing you'll ever learn, is just to love and be loved 
in return” 
    A devoted husband helping his disabled wife of twenty four years, with her 
  sleeve that seems to be caught with in it’s self – inside out some people 
call it.
   In the middle of the day in the center of their living room they begin  
  dancing cheek to cheek, the embrace is important, not the missed steps of 
paralyzed legs. 
   He whispers in her ear “I love you sweetie” then twirls with her empty
  sleeve. He giggles when he finally notices a neighbor compelled to look in 
  their first floor apartment window at a man apparently dancing with a sleeve. 
       The husband graciously takes a bow and together they laugh at the 
thought that the passer by cannot see his beautiful wife sitting in a 
wheelchair with her heart on her sleeve. 
   

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