Hi, re: https://www.qubes-os.org/doc/template/fedora/upgrade-23-to-24/
Really nice job on the instructions, wow! Very detailed and precise. I could maybe add a few tidbits to consider adding on the documentation. Probably not needed if I could do it but anyway... I would suggest indenting steps 5 through 6 to really drive home it's a path taken only if needed - maybe even make step 4 a decision tree at the end. Step 7 - To help newer folks, just like you did in step 9-3, consider adding (from dom0). I realize it's obvious, but I missed it. Step 9 - I would consider not saying this is optional... You might say "Strongly Suggested!" Step 9-2 - consider adding "Look at the Qubes VM manager, highlight and right-click any and all VMs that show Fedora 23, and then change the template to Fedora 24. Step 10 - Might add a note: Be careful not to remove fedora-24 !!! I almost did it, no idea how, temporary dyslexia maybe! Well, I'm "in the masses" of folks, some of these things may seem too elementary but perhaps it would help some. Again, great job! Patrick Dallas -- You received this message because you are subscribed to the Google Groups "qubes-devel" group. To unsubscribe from this group and stop receiving emails from it, send an email to [email protected]. To post to this group, send email to [email protected]. To view this discussion on the web visit https://groups.google.com/d/msgid/qubes-devel/72deed6b-c31e-4d1d-a012-047dd2dcd2d0%40googlegroups.com. For more options, visit https://groups.google.com/d/optout.
