On 6/6/18 06:56, Hollenbeck, Scott wrote:
-----Original Message-----
From: Adam Roach <[email protected]>
...
I read the text as calling for implementors to concatenate "XXXX-YYYY"
to the
end of the IANA-registered base URL ("https://example.com/rdap/";),
resulting in "https://example.com/rdap/XXXX-YYYY";. The example instead
shows "https://example.com/rdap/entity/XXXX-YYY";. Is the inclusion of
"entity/" in this example an error?
No, it's not an error. That’s the path segment that 7482 describes for
entity queries. I can see how my text above might be confusing, though, so
how about this wording instead?
OLD:
"The base RDAP URL is concatenated to the entity handle to create a
complete RDAP query path segment of "https://example.com/rdap/entity/XXXX-
YYYY""
NEW:
"The RDAP query URL is formed using the base RDAP URL and entity path
segment described in Section 3.1.5 of RFC 7482, using "XXXX-YYY" as the
value of the handle identifier. The complete RDAP query URL becomes
"https://example.com/rdap/entity/XXXX-YYYY".";

That seems good.

Thanks for the explanations. Based on what you've said, I think this is
ready for IETF last call -- you can treat my comment for clarification
of the example as an IETF last call comment, and address it along with
any other feedback you receive during last call.
Will do - thanks!

IETF Last Call has concluded, and I didn't see any other comments that would necessitate changes in the document. Just to make sure we're on the same page, I'm waiting on a -04 version of the document reflecting the above change prior to asking for the IESG to ballot on the document. Let me know if that's not what you expect.

/a

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