Thank you Scott, Comments inline.
Regards, Gustavo On 2/28/20, 07:17, "regext on behalf of Hollenbeck, Scott" <[email protected] on behalf of [email protected]> wrote: > -----Original Message----- > From: regext <[email protected]> On Behalf Of Antoin Verschuren > Sent: Friday, February 14, 2020 10:01 AM > To: regext <[email protected]> > Subject: [EXTERNAL] [regext] WG LAST CALL: draft-ietf-regext-tmch-func- > spec > > The following working group document is believed to be ready for > submission to the IESG for publication as an Informational document: > > https://urldefense.proofpoint.com/v2/url?u=https-3A__datatracker.ietf.org_doc_draft-2Dietf-2Dregext-2Dtmch-2Dfunc-2Dspec_&d=DwIGaQ&c=FmY1u3PJp6wrcrwll3mSVzgfkbPSS6sJms7xcl4I5cM&r=VbweciUcwYQpIOZDSxl0ezGd1hGDtd-0BvgAgfmwfE0&m=gChL047ncZhA5g-WHSBuzKDgXtyQQkPxKa1UV6_b_R4&s=Pd6hP_3xoBBmLnpmZwuxkp6BkY5qS9B6saWNRBvNP_A&e= > > This WG last call will end at close of business, Friday, 28 February 2020. > > Please review this document and indicate your support (a simple “+1” is > sufficient) or concerns with the publication of this document by replying to > this message on the list. +1, but I do see some minor issues in Section 10, IANA Considerations: 1. "One URI assignment have been registered by the IANA", but two assignments are requested. That text should say "Two URI assignments have been registered by the IANA". GL- Fixed in version 07, here: https://tools.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-regext-tmch-func-spec-07.txt 2. It's been a recent convention to include "epp" in the URNs, e.g. "urn:ietf:params:xml:ns:epp:<identifier>" vs. "urn:ietf:params:xml:ns:<identifier>". It may be worth noting somewhere why that convention isn't being followed here. Perhaps there are existing implementations that would be difficult to change? GL- There are existing implementations that would be extremely difficult to change. The first version of this draft is from March 2013, and the draft was developed while the TMCH implementation was ongoing. 3. The schema URN is incorrect. "URI: urn:ietf:params:xml:ns:tmNotice-1.0" should be "URI: urn:ietf:params:xml:schema:tmNotice-1.0". GL- Fixed in version 07, here: https://tools.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-regext-tmch-func-spec-07.txt Scott _______________________________________________ regext mailing list [email protected] https://urldefense.proofpoint.com/v2/url?u=https-3A__www.ietf.org_mailman_listinfo_regext&d=DwIGaQ&c=FmY1u3PJp6wrcrwll3mSVzgfkbPSS6sJms7xcl4I5cM&r=VbweciUcwYQpIOZDSxl0ezGd1hGDtd-0BvgAgfmwfE0&m=gChL047ncZhA5g-WHSBuzKDgXtyQQkPxKa1UV6_b_R4&s=9GzrIKxLZqhDIkAOSL0bAmHsu1UZD1ywJjm1hO2JZTc&e= _______________________________________________ regext mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/regext
