From: regext <[email protected]> On Behalf Of Mario Loffredo Sent: Thursday, June 11, 2020 11:14 AM To: [email protected] Subject: [EXTERNAL] Re: [regext] I-D Action: draft-ietf-regext-rfc7482bis-00.txt Hi Scott, please find below some possible changes to RFC7482bis. 1) Section 1. - I would replace "are" with "is" in the following sentence: The intent of the patterns described here are to enable queries [SAH] Agreed. 2) Section 3.1.1 - I would remove the phrase "if possible" in the following sentence: therefore, the corresponding syntax extension in RFC 6874 [RFC6874] MUST NOT be used, and servers are to ignore it if possible. [SAH] Agreed. 3) Section 4.1 - I would rewrite the following statement using MUST/REQUIRED Only a single asterisk is allowed for a partial string search. [SAH] Suggestion: "A partial string search MUST NOT include more than one asterisk." 4) Section 4.1 - I would uppercase "should" in: Clients should avoid submitting a partial match search of Unicode characters where a Unicode character may be legally combined with another Unicode character or characters. [SAH] Agreed. Best, Mario Il 05/06/2020 17:36, [email protected]<mailto:[email protected]> ha scritto: A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories. This draft is a work item of the Registration Protocols Extensions WG of the IETF. Title : Registration Data Access Protocol (RDAP) Query Format Authors : Scott Hollenbeck Andy Newton Filename : draft-ietf-regext-rfc7482bis-00.txt Pages : 25 Date : 2020-06-05 Abstract: This document describes uniform patterns to construct HTTP URLs that may be used to retrieve registration information from registries (including both Regional Internet Registries (RIRs) and Domain Name Registries (DNRs)) using "RESTful" web access patterns. These uniform patterns define the query syntax for the Registration Data Access Protocol (RDAP). The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-regext-rfc7482bis/<https://secure-web.cisco.com/1qYqz0a9BpiU8XBrFUsF9Y9KTrIHZjCyk7toBOOeZc4BG7BMvSXlaRjQPeFU-3LmhAfeRfNjjsRoYRyxVpU3tL2wQk0m_WiIvsmCjV1hrQO80mWox-XLpFbQQs9_TeIF_pXfvwtEpVyZbAvShzo0C_a9XM2SESVDZ-h7uzqk1gX1n3Su4Fjb7obUsm3I_HGKLGcacaTBn6gNMBuU8VW5wyRVO4VJoXX4X2AAs0Zq7ve-GZoKl_a_7pbfiW-J9pLhRs0f_0BMqaJo83ZRISgjaeA/https%3A%2F%2Fdatatracker.ietf.org%2Fdoc%2Fdraft-ietf-regext-rfc7482bis%2F> There are also htmlized versions available at: https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-regext-rfc7482bis-00<https://secure-web.cisco.com/1csSjZpsGgbrN0mMZZ78YpYSxbGCiQPlrlLQA6xKc3NUrhq6jP1qHUyuDKRrXM5R_eiu1IYsfdAemx_OZT3mjZ8cWOmih3Zu0WlICD1qUkpQ34W6Gh7QF38ihpCj8XgG8Nax5Ns-7pm9kObjx_ZCsMh0xX6Pb-FDxW7AnGR8ENTSqRcit4tO22twwSlHMFnAW8rYCeFQgAzwBY9c7o4pqk-V_Eb5bMWGw6_i47kr7sJZHUW-0a-D9GiqWspZyfq82bats9eZ4QXp7NDjZGeOi_c0rvB7OyMVLRTE8okdvVVU/https%3A%2F%2Ftools.ietf.org%2Fhtml%2Fdraft-ietf-regext-rfc7482bis-00> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-regext-rfc7482bis-00<https://secure-web.cisco.com/1Y3XfhrQnGgCvgWKWH1nPmdGv-QQJWhe54jQfsoojkzwdO5R7Qiey1GMpAQH3WqfT1MD-l5VjJiJGaGJFP-8yNdvH0e3DW0lwbloQJsSY8Z1jN5F_c3xPcC4QnzpOmXIMNVoiPsH0z4Q1lQr04mL0rMx2bGzTzq2QS6MLSLJ5vhnG4OsUd6bkG3UrRBsL4b8viNmvxqBtV8YO_ZIrFOHAynA83EzG6XDhjtJNnAxzgw3vHfXpOn5B9LiTq1sr3Lxczw9wl48eSapu1jEmPFGLZw/https%3A%2F%2Fdatatracker.ietf.org%2Fdoc%2Fhtml%2Fdraft-ietf-regext-rfc7482bis-00> Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of submission until the htmlized version and diff are available at tools.ietf.org. Internet-Drafts are also available by anonymous FTP at: ftp://ftp.ietf.org/internet-drafts/ _______________________________________________ regext mailing list [email protected]<mailto:[email protected]> https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/regext<https://secure-web.cisco.com/1SZNqFgR5JwjxI6MtiQBgnj5eQCoKlmYb3lvgy-LEPfvlbMSKdjVLz92uB98Eo9OyGF2GUy2d42C1dn-vSW4iq4m3MfJObe0G81dfK79dcoKuLNrmpnu2G16trKCc2WJEuUHZ5SwF-QfDUGE2RHSeo2sXwND6AlxO34gQnEL-naQzxNuZQsNe9gNmant5ribfsLZNUxQHwWqePQUKZlUC1EdeTeyqYUGTEyuACpUunHqmhKhwUoCOym8sg0nSoKQXStqypY7Pxh-2INRT0PymjA/https%3A%2F%2Fwww.ietf.org%2Fmailman%2Flistinfo%2Fregext> -- Dr. Mario Loffredo Systems and Technological Development Unit Institute of Informatics and Telematics (IIT) National Research Council (CNR) via G. Moruzzi 1, I-56124 PISA, Italy Phone: +39.0503153497 Mobile: +39.3462122240 Web: http://www.iit.cnr.it/mario.loffredo<http://secure-web.cisco.com/1DJgr3g6CYX-zAgxOKFFY4jAFM0Ry1tsCwqypEhbwebLsm6SUkth7a9GbcxQQR2S9klU5ZFcMX4mO61Aw0_iJ1-WZ7FtQX5phbtXr0F5cljz3A4UdVqRMcgSiGDoaCXCKQwrkaolpuXMu2J4_F2aqgs35BHa2w34FYa6Zjo_bU-p58LdkPAHEdqx_I9YXNxDqRf2SeD3XEMq1Trc64X6FzniAe1sFAvc8_BLXVIJYmCBbmp1p9NUUdBxFho0gMD43O_9h2EfpBEhpTlpTklqhnA/http%3A%2F%2Fwww.iit.cnr.it%2Fmario.loffredo> #pleasestayathome
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