Hi Scott, Inviato da iPhone
> Il giorno 17 giu 2020, alle ore 15:34, Hollenbeck, Scott > <[email protected]> ha scritto: > > > > > From: regext <[email protected]> On Behalf Of Mario Loffredo > Sent: Thursday, June 11, 2020 11:14 AM > To: [email protected] > Subject: [EXTERNAL] Re: [regext] I-D Action: > draft-ietf-regext-rfc7482bis-00.txt > > Hi Scott, > > please find below some possible changes to RFC7482bis. > > 1) Section 1. - I would replace "are" with "is" in the following sentence: > > The intent of the patterns described here are to enable queries > > [SAH] Agreed. > 2) Section 3.1.1 - I would remove the phrase "if possible" in the following > sentence: > > therefore, the > corresponding syntax extension in RFC 6874 [RFC6874] MUST NOT be > used, and servers are to ignore it if possible. > > [SAH] Agreed. > 3) Section 4.1 - I would rewrite the following statement using MUST/REQUIRED > > Only a single asterisk is allowed for a partial string search. > > [SAH] Suggestion: “A partial string search MUST NOT include more than one > asterisk.” Agreed. > 4) Section 4.1 - I would uppercase "should" in: > > Clients should avoid submitting a partial match search of Unicode > characters where a Unicode character may be legally combined with > another Unicode character or characters. > > [SAH] Agreed. > Best, > > Mario > > > Il 05/06/2020 17:36, [email protected] ha scritto: > > A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts > directories. > This draft is a work item of the Registration Protocols Extensions WG of the > IETF. > > Title : Registration Data Access Protocol (RDAP) Query > Format > Authors : Scott Hollenbeck > Andy Newton > Filename : draft-ietf-regext-rfc7482bis-00.txt > Pages : 25 > Date : 2020-06-05 > > Abstract: > This document describes uniform patterns to construct HTTP URLs that > may be used to retrieve registration information from registries > (including both Regional Internet Registries (RIRs) and Domain Name > Registries (DNRs)) using "RESTful" web access patterns. These > uniform patterns define the query syntax for the Registration Data > Access Protocol (RDAP). > > > The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is: > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-regext-rfc7482bis/ > > There are also htmlized versions available at: > https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-regext-rfc7482bis-00 > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-regext-rfc7482bis-00 > > > Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of submission > until the htmlized version and diff are available at tools.ietf.org. > > Internet-Drafts are also available by anonymous FTP at: > ftp://ftp.ietf.org/internet-drafts/ > > > _______________________________________________ > regext mailing list > [email protected] > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/regext > -- > Dr. Mario Loffredo > Systems and Technological Development Unit > Institute of Informatics and Telematics (IIT) > National Research Council (CNR) > via G. Moruzzi 1, I-56124 PISA, Italy > Phone: +39.0503153497 > Mobile: +39.3462122240 > Web: http://www.iit.cnr.it/mario.loffredo > #pleasestayathome
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