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> Subject: [EXTERNAL] Éric Vyncke's No Objection on draft-ietf-regext-
> rfc7482bis-02: (with COMMENT)
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> Éric Vyncke has entered the following ballot position for
> draft-ietf-regext-rfc7482bis-02: No Objection
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[SAH] [snip]
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> COMMENT:
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>
> Thank you for the work put into this document. I found the document clear
> and easy to read.
>
> Please find below some non-blocking COMMENT points (but replies would
> be appreciated), and some nits.
>
> I hope that this helps to improve the document,
>
> Regards,
>
> -éric
>
> == COMMENTS ==
>
> -- Section 2 --
> Please use BCP14 template (cfr RFC 8714).
[SAH] Will fix.
> -- Section 3.1.1 --
> CIDR RFC 4632 only applies to IPv4... and also uses the words 'prefix length'
> rather than 'bitmask length'.
[SAH] Do you know of an appropriate reference for IPv6? I can change "bitmask
length" to "prefix length".
> "2001:db8::0" is not following the RFC 5952 that is RECOMMENDED just a
> couple of paragraphs above ;-)
[SAH] Please explain. What's needed for a fix?
> == NITS ==
>
> Like Ben Kaduk, I wonder why using a 16-bit value for US-ASCII "('*', US-ASCII
> value 0x002A)"...
[SAH] Will fix.
Scott
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