Thanks, Jim. I fixed it.

> On 6. Apr 2021, at 18:33, Gould, James <[email protected]> wrote:
> 
> Tobias,
>  
> It looks good with one nit of making descriptions plural as in “Zero or more 
> OPTIONAL free-form descriptions”.  
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> JG
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> From: Tobias Sattler <[email protected] 
> <mailto:[email protected]>>
> Date: Tuesday, April 6, 2021 at 12:29 PM
> To: James Gould <[email protected] <mailto:[email protected]>>, 
> "[email protected] <mailto:[email protected]>" 
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> Cc: "[email protected] <mailto:[email protected]>" <[email protected] 
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> Subject: [EXTERNAL] Re: [regext] I-D Action: 
> draft-ietf-regext-epp-registry-maintenance-12.txt
>  
> Thanks Michael and Jim. 
>  
> I’ve made the adjustment on GitHub for your review.
> https://github.com/seitsu/registry-epp-maintenance/blob/master/draft-ietf-regext-epp-registry-maintenance.txt
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> Tobias
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> 
>> On 6. Apr 2021, at 14:21, Gould, James <[email protected] 
>> <mailto:[email protected]>> wrote:
>>  
>> If the intent is to support a list of description elements, then my 
>> recommendation is to update the schema, as previously noted with 
>> maxOccurs="unbounded", and update the description of the element with 
>> something similar to:
>> 
>> Zero or more OPTIONAL free-form descriptions of the maintenance...
>> 
>> -- 
>> 
>> JG
>> 
>> 
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>> On 4/6/21, 5:50 AM, "regext on behalf of Michael Bauland" 
>> <[email protected] <mailto:[email protected]> on behalf 
>> [email protected] <mailto:[email protected]>> wrote:
>> 
>> 
>>    Hi Jody,
>> 
>>    thanks for your answer.
>> 
>>    I agree with your comments, but there is still an issue with the
>>    descriptions in multiple languages. You said:
>> 
>> 
>>> << JWK
>>> The maint:description element is unbounded.  If descriptions in different 
>>> languages are needed, they can be sent on the same poll message.
>>> 
>>>>>  
>> 
>>    I think this is not the case according to the schema:
>> 
>>         <complexType name="maintDataType">
>>           <sequence>
>>             <element name="id" type="maint:idType"/>
>>             <element name="type" type="maint:typeType" minOccurs="0"/>
>>             <element name="pollType" type="maint:pollType" minOccurs="0"/>
>>             <element name="systems" type="maint:systemsType"/>
>>             <element name="environment" type="maint:envType"/>
>>             <element name="start" type="dateTime"/>
>>             <element name="end" type="dateTime"/>
>>             <element name="reason" type="maint:reasonEnum"/>
>>             <element name="detail" type="anyURI" minOccurs="0"/>
>>             <element name="description" type="maint:descriptionType"
>>              minOccurs="0"/>
>>             <element name="tlds" type="maint:tldsType" minOccurs="0"/>
>>             <element name="intervention" type="maint:interventionType"
>>              minOccurs="0"/>
>>             <element name="crDate" type="dateTime"/>
>>             <element name="upDate" type="dateTime" minOccurs="0"/>
>>           </sequence>
>>         </complexType>
>> 
>>    There is no maxOccurs element and the default is maxOccurs="1".
>>    My suggestion is to update the schema and allow unbounded occurrences to
>>    support multiple languages in one notification.
>> 
>>    Best regards,
>> 
>>    Michael
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