Tobias,
I have one more proposed change to the draft upon further review. For the
<maint:impact> element, no impact to availability is not covered. My
recommendation is to add support for the “none” value, with language such as
the following:
The impact level; the values MUST either be "full", "partial", or "none". If
access is completely unavailable, it is "full". If there is degradation in
availability, it is "partial". If there is no impact to availability, it is
"none".
The impactEnum would then be changed to:
<simpleType name="impactEnum">
<restriction base="token">
<enumeration value="partial"/>
<enumeration value="full"/>
<enumeration value="none"/>
</restriction>
</simpleType>
Thanks,
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From: Tobias Sattler <[email protected]>
Date: Tuesday, April 6, 2021 at 1:10 PM
To: James Gould <[email protected]>
Cc: "[email protected]" <[email protected]>
Subject: [EXTERNAL] Re: [regext] I-D Action:
draft-ietf-regext-epp-registry-maintenance-12.txt
Thanks, Jim.
Please see my comments inline.
The updates are done on GitHub for your review.
Tobias
On 6. Apr 2021, at 18:58, Gould, James
<[email protected]<mailto:[email protected]>> wrote:
Tobias,
In reviewing the version of the draft in GitHub, I have the following feedback:
1. Nit – There is an extra line in the second paragraph of section
4.1.3.1 “Info Maintenance Item” that looks like it needs to be removed.
a. When an <info> command has been processed successfully, the EPP
b.
c. <resData>
TS: Thanks! Fixed.
2. Nit – It may be useful to adjust the dates in the draft to be in the
future. For example:
a. Section 4.1.3.1 Info Maintenance Info example
i.
2020-12-30T06:00:00Z to 2021-12-30T06:00:00Z
ii.
2020-12-30T14:25:57Z to 2021-12-30T14:25:57Z
iii.
2020-10-08T22:10:00Z to 2021-10-08T22:10:00Z
b. Section 4.1.3.2 Info Maintenance List example
i.
2020-12-30T06:00:00Z to 2021-12-30T06:00:00Z
ii.
2020-12-30T07:00:00Z to 2021-12-30T07:00:00Z
iii.
2020-09-08T22:10:00Z to 2021-09-08T22:10:00Z
iv.
2021-02-15T04:30:00Z to 2022-02-15T04:30:00Z
v.
2021-02-15T05:30:00Z to 2022-02-15T05:30:00Z
vi.
2020-09-08T22:11:00Z to 2021-09-08T22:11:00Z
vii.
2020-10-17T15:00:00Z to 2021-10-17T15:00:00Z
c. Section 4.1.4 “EPP <poll> Command” example
i.
2020-12-30T06:00:00Z to 2021-12-30T06:00:00Z
ii.
2020-12-30T14:25:57Z to 2021-12-30T14:25:57Z
iii.
2020-10-08T22:10:00Z to 2021-10-08T22:10:00Z
TS: I’ve added another year to each timestamp.
3. Once the draft passes WGLC, my recommendation is to change the XML
namespace from urn:ietf:params:xml:ns:epp:maintenance-0.3 to
urn:ietf:params:xml:ns:epp:maintenance-1.0
TS: Will keep that in mind and do the update after WGLC.
Thanks,
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From: Tobias Sattler
<[email protected]<mailto:[email protected]>>
Date: Tuesday, April 6, 2021 at 12:29 PM
To: James Gould <[email protected]<mailto:[email protected]>>,
"[email protected]<mailto:[email protected]>"
<[email protected]<mailto:[email protected]>>
Cc: "[email protected]<mailto:[email protected]>"
<[email protected]<mailto:[email protected]>>
Subject: [EXTERNAL] Re: [regext] I-D Action:
draft-ietf-regext-epp-registry-maintenance-12.txt
Thanks Michael and Jim.
I’ve made the adjustment on GitHub for your review.
https://github.com/seitsu/registry-epp-maintenance/blob/master/draft-ietf-regext-epp-registry-maintenance.txt<https://secure-web.cisco.com/1qHhn9m_n0q1Aop-LvX59fsy8JV04r9d-NS_iCDZ5x8vZ_ZXeJt2CO7oDXK27hsU8Mr8S_41nsjRPFrjYDAiFveBRZ3ZkF5Nw_uo2v2SnNYXN7rkMl6JYfcd0O3CGnC0_kwrvWmTkqx6cPzh6l4_7icShqr4GYvhj7rqXvmaccBz2M5PDzZm--ziQiAUKihBIGtyIJkMdPi33ApZBYhIAqUSMx1C5YFQyxN622sUqjir77szIdHyTOIdQrMiPLsb6/https%3A%2F%2Fgithub.com%2Fseitsu%2Fregistry-epp-maintenance%2Fblob%2Fmaster%2Fdraft-ietf-regext-epp-registry-maintenance.txt>
Tobias
On 6. Apr 2021, at 14:21, Gould, James
<[email protected]<mailto:[email protected]>>
wrote:
If the intent is to support a list of description elements, then my
recommendation is to update the schema, as previously noted with
maxOccurs="unbounded", and update the description of the element with something
similar to:
Zero or more OPTIONAL free-form descriptions of the maintenance...
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On 4/6/21, 5:50 AM, "regext on behalf of Michael Bauland"
<[email protected]<mailto:[email protected]> on behalf
[email protected]<mailto:[email protected]>> wrote:
Hi Jody,
thanks for your answer.
I agree with your comments, but there is still an issue with the
descriptions in multiple languages. You said:
<< JWK
The maint:description element is unbounded. If descriptions in different
languages are needed, they can be sent on the same poll message.
I think this is not the case according to the schema:
<complexType name="maintDataType">
<sequence>
<element name="id" type="maint:idType"/>
<element name="type" type="maint:typeType" minOccurs="0"/>
<element name="pollType" type="maint:pollType" minOccurs="0"/>
<element name="systems" type="maint:systemsType"/>
<element name="environment" type="maint:envType"/>
<element name="start" type="dateTime"/>
<element name="end" type="dateTime"/>
<element name="reason" type="maint:reasonEnum"/>
<element name="detail" type="anyURI" minOccurs="0"/>
<element name="description" type="maint:descriptionType"
minOccurs="0"/>
<element name="tlds" type="maint:tldsType" minOccurs="0"/>
<element name="intervention" type="maint:interventionType"
minOccurs="0"/>
<element name="crDate" type="dateTime"/>
<element name="upDate" type="dateTime" minOccurs="0"/>
</sequence>
</complexType>
There is no maxOccurs element and the default is maxOccurs="1".
My suggestion is to update the schema and allow unbounded occurrences to
support multiple languages in one notification.
Best regards,
Michael
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