Thanks Denis. Here's my follow-up comments.
> * The [...] > * The [...] > * The [...] > * The [...] It was omitted on purpose. This is directed, bulleted communication. It's usual to omit articles in such cases. >> * Hardware locked with proprietary screws. >> * Non-replaceable battery. > The hardware is not sustainable as it is not repairable, and the > battery not replaceable either. Better have two simple sentences than one long sentence. E.g.: * Hardware cannot be repaired and is thus unsustainable. * Non-replaceable battery. >> * Drivers are proprietary and opaque. >> * Drivers can include bugs and/or backdoors, intentional or >> unintentional. >> * Drivers are written once and forever forgotten. Time to market is >> king. > * The OS, drivers and applications are all nonfree. Users cannot > install free free software applications without breaking the security > of the device. Same as above. Better have it broken into pieces: * OS, drivers and applications are all nonfree. * Users cannot install free software applications without breaking the security of the device. >> * Graphics are slow as rendering must be done on the CPU. > 3D acceleration is lacking as the free software drivers require more > work to be usable in Android (Lima), or because the GPU has no > documentation and no free drivers (PowerVR). Too much detail for a non-technical audience. Better something like: * No 3D acceleration due to lack of free software drivers. Everything else seems ok.
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