Will Berkeley has posted comments on this change.

Change subject: Kudu Consistency Blog Post Pt1
......................................................................


Patch Set 10:

(15 comments)

http://gerrit.cloudera.org:8080/#/c/7019/10/_posts/2017-08-21-kudu-consistency-pt1.md
File _posts/2017-08-21-kudu-consistency-pt1.md:

PS10, Line 7: what is currently implemented
Consider "current features" instead.


PS10, Line 7: what are the next step
Consider just "next steps".


PS10, Line 8: into
on


PS10, Line 12: we review/introduce some concepts
This sentence has the same purpose as the last sentence of the previous 
paragraph, and is closely related to the first sentence of the post. Could all 
three be combined into one sentence, or two adjacent sentences? I suggest 
either introducing the series and first post in the first two sentences, or 
replacing the first sentence with a "hook", something that concisely and 
informally describes what consistency is and why it's important, and then make 
the last two sentences of the first paragraph about the content of the series 
and the content of the first post.


PS10, Line 23: ,
Remove


PS10, Line 25:  
a


PS10, Line 26: would happen
happen


PS10, Line 37: having to deal
that have to deal


PS10, Line 39: '
Is this a well-known quote?


PS10, Line 55: ,
;


PS10, Line 66: that execute
Remove


PS10, Line 106: future feature
Should we link to a JIRA here?


PS10, Line 121: kudu
Kudu


PS10, Line 122: with the particularity that causally related mutations
              : may be required to have increasing timestamps.
What are "causally-related mutations"?


PS10, Line 133: more
Remove


-- 
To view, visit http://gerrit.cloudera.org:8080/7019
To unsubscribe, visit http://gerrit.cloudera.org:8080/settings

Gerrit-MessageType: comment
Gerrit-Change-Id: Icaec0c8ace20651a65901a8e1786e785265540d1
Gerrit-PatchSet: 10
Gerrit-Project: kudu
Gerrit-Branch: gh-pages
Gerrit-Owner: David Ribeiro Alves <[email protected]>
Gerrit-Reviewer: Alexey Serbin <[email protected]>
Gerrit-Reviewer: Andrew Wong <[email protected]>
Gerrit-Reviewer: David Ribeiro Alves <[email protected]>
Gerrit-Reviewer: Will Berkeley <[email protected]>
Gerrit-HasComments: Yes

Reply via email to