Todd Lipcon has posted comments on this change. ( 
http://gerrit.cloudera.org:8080/8960 )

Change subject: Adding a subsection to NTP troubleshooting section to cover 
frequent cases of NTP crashes when the Kudu cluster is deployed on Microsoft 
Azure
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Patch Set 1:

(7 comments)

http://gerrit.cloudera.org:8080/#/c/8960/1/docs/troubleshooting.adoc
File docs/troubleshooting.adoc:

http://gerrit.cloudera.org:8080/#/c/8960/1/docs/troubleshooting.adoc@125
PS1, Line 125: ==== NTP Clock on Microsoft Azure Deployments
nit: trailing whitespace


http://gerrit.cloudera.org:8080/#/c/8960/1/docs/troubleshooting.adoc@127
PS1, Line 127: NTP Clock reports unsynchronized in some cases on Kudu clusters 
deployed on Microsoft Azure. Following frequent root causes can help 
troubleshoot the issue.
nit: can you wrap this to 80-100 coluns as done elsewhere in the file?


http://gerrit.cloudera.org:8080/#/c/8960/1/docs/troubleshooting.adoc@129
PS1, Line 129: https
this raw link sitting in the documentation doesn't look good


http://gerrit.cloudera.org:8080/#/c/8960/1/docs/troubleshooting.adoc@129
PS1, Line 129: Trun
typo


http://gerrit.cloudera.org:8080/#/c/8960/1/docs/troubleshooting.adoc@129
PS1, Line 129: CentrifyDC
is Centrify Azure-specific? Should this be a separate troubleshooting point?


http://gerrit.cloudera.org:8080/#/c/8960/1/docs/troubleshooting.adoc@129
PS1, Line 129: centrifydc.conf
can you format file names appropriately using `...`?


http://gerrit.cloudera.org:8080/#/c/8960/1/docs/troubleshooting.adoc@135
PS1, Line 135: script
how can this script be automated to run at startup on every startup? Seems to 
require a manual step in there



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Gerrit-Project: kudu
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