Adar Dembo has posted comments on this change. ( 
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Change subject: [doc] update on NTP clock synchronization
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Patch Set 5:

(9 comments)

http://gerrit.cloudera.org:8080/#/c/15141/5/docs/troubleshooting.adoc
File docs/troubleshooting.adoc:

http://gerrit.cloudera.org:8080/#/c/15141/5/docs/troubleshooting.adoc@312
PS5, Line 312: enabled
Nit: drop


http://gerrit.cloudera.org:8080/#/c/15141/5/docs/troubleshooting.adoc@312
PS5, Line 312: local
Nit: "the local"


http://gerrit.cloudera.org:8080/#/c/15141/5/docs/troubleshooting.adoc@313
PS5, Line 313: is always
"will always be"


http://gerrit.cloudera.org:8080/#/c/15141/5/docs/troubleshooting.adoc@314
PS5, Line 314: because of that
Nit: drop


http://gerrit.cloudera.org:8080/#/c/15141/5/docs/troubleshooting.adoc@314
PS5, Line 314: are not
"will not be"


http://gerrit.cloudera.org:8080/#/c/15141/5/docs/troubleshooting.adoc@357
PS5, Line 357: tight
This is a bit vague; does it mean a lower than default value? Higher than 
default?


http://gerrit.cloudera.org:8080/#/c/15141/5/docs/troubleshooting.adoc@358
PS5, Line 358: i.e. tell
replace with "which will cause"


http://gerrit.cloudera.org:8080/#/c/15141/5/docs/troubleshooting.adoc@364
PS5, Line 364: to be
Nit: drop


http://gerrit.cloudera.org:8080/#/c/15141/5/docs/troubleshooting.adoc@367
PS5, Line 367: the manual page on
             : `ntp.conf`.
Nit: the `ntp.conf` manual page.



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