On Sunday 26 December 2010 21:06:34 Thomas Friedrichsmeier wrote: > Hi! > > I'll take another look tomorrow or the day after that. Some comments: > > On Sunday 26 December 2010, Stefan Rödiger wrote: > > 0) Check for any missing authors guideline. From what I can see we are > > conform the the requirements. > > 1) I would like to ask everybody which final paragraph of the > > background.tex and which of section "Help system" you prefer (look for > > the %)? > > you prefer. > > I like the style of the non-commented version, but it's not accurate: The > example session come after the GUI elements, not after the technical > details. And of course it's the technical details, which will be compared, > where appropriate.
Okay, I changed/corrected that and took the non-commented version (regarding the background.tex). I need a vote for the section "Help system" too. > > > 2) Please give me feedback which figure are not good readable for you. Can I take no comment for the moment being as accepted? > > 3) Check that we use consistent term etc. (for example it's always > > "section" not > > "Section", "Figure" not "Fig." or "figure"). Other examples are "help > > page" vs. "help-page" or "``Submit button''" vs. "Submit button". > > I'm fairly certain that it should be "Section x.y", not "section x.y" (but > lowercase when writing "section" without a number: "in this section / in > the next section"). See the examples in http://www.jstatsoft.org/style. > It's also what the APA-styleguide says (for whatever that is worth in this > context). Okay, I took care of this. > > > 4) If I get it right \proglang{} is only for languages (XML, HTML, R, > > C++, Qt, ECMAScript, ...) not for programs like Red-R or RKWard (see > > 5)). > > Yes, but it does not appear to be clear-cut. Citing from jss.dtx: > % This should be used for typesetting the names of programming > % languages, e.g., |\proglang{Java}|, |\proglang{C++}| or |\proglang{R}|. > % This applies also to programmable environments which also have a GUI > % like |\proglang{SAS}|, |\proglang{Stata}| or |\proglang{S-PLUS}|. > > Programmable environments could certainly be stretched to include KDE, but > also Red-R, and RKWard. Still I guess it's best to restrict it as you > suggest. > Okay, we keep it without anything. We keep \proglang{KDE} but stick with Red-R and RKWard. > > 5) Do you wish to emphasise words like RKWard, TDI? > > We certainly shouldn't emphasise all technical terms like TDI. We might > emphasise RKWard (see above), but I'd leave it as is, for now. If the > editors want that, it will be easy to revise. > Same opinion here. I just had the impression that some co-authors prefer it emphasised. > > 6) Does anybody see a need to add something to Conclusion and Outlook? If > > so when do you plan to finish it? > > I don't plan to add anything. Okay. Same for me. > > > Generally: > > * 31.12 is the official deadline. I would like to sent it earlier (29. or > > 30. in case the editors need something else). > > Yes. I propose to target the 29th, meaning the 28th will be the last day to > make any changes. Of course if there is a good reason to add another day, > we can still do that. > Okay. Let's stick with it. Official target is the 28th with the 29th as buffer. > Regards > Thomas Regards Stefan Side note: The weather is quite unpredictable and I have to use a surf stick currently ... . In case you don't see a "I submitted" message from me on the list (latest 30th evening) somebody else shouldn't hesitate to submit. Who wants to be the "backup"? To make it clear I intend to submit the paper as we discussed before (unless there is a unforeseeable reason). I would just like to be on the safe side. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------ Learn how Oracle Real Application Clusters (RAC) One Node allows customers to consolidate database storage, standardize their database environment, and, should the need arise, upgrade to a full multi-node Oracle RAC database without downtime or disruption http://p.sf.net/sfu/oracle-sfdevnl _______________________________________________ RKWard-devel mailing list RKWard-devel@lists.sourceforge.net https://lists.sourceforge.net/lists/listinfo/rkward-devel
