On Monday 27 December 2010 15:40:21 Thomas Friedrichsmeier wrote: > Hi, > > On Monday 27 December 2010, Stefan Rödiger wrote: > > On Sunday 26 December 2010 21:06:34 Thomas Friedrichsmeier wrote: > > > I'll take another look tomorrow or the day after that. Some comments: > ok, first half is committed, second half will follow, later. > > Most of my edits are formatting or minor editing, but at some places I also > removed a sentence or two which I found redundant. Where I did, I've added > comments in the .tex files.
I plan to remove to comments completely at the end. Most of them are corrected and out. Some comments are still there. ... > > Some more comments / answers: > > I need a vote for the section "Help system" too. > > I like the non-commented version better, too, but I've edited it some more. > > > > > 2) Please give me feedback which figure are not good readable for > > > > you. > > > > Can I take no comment for the moment being as accepted? > > I did look at a printout so far. But as Prasenjit said, there's only so > much that can be done for the print quality of a screenshot. > > Two other things that I've stumbled across: > - Section 3.5 refers to Figure 8 many pages ahead. I think it should get a > separate screenshot, resembling 8A, but with no filename entered, yet. Done. I added the code window and some legend text too. Any wishes on that? > - In Figure 2, I suggest to extend area D to include the tool buttons > (consistent with area B, and with the text), and correspondingly to limit > area E to the status bar. Done in the latest commit. Does it need further changes? I added thin white lines between the black lines to get maximum contrast. If you edit the figure please take care of this. > > > Side note: The weather is quite unpredictable and I have to use a surf > > stick currently ... . In case you don't see a "I submitted" message from > > me on the list (latest 30th evening) somebody else shouldn't hesitate to > > submit. Who wants to be the "backup"? To make it clear I intend to submit > > the paper as we discussed before (unless there is a unforeseeable > > reason). I would just like to be on the safe side. > > Ok, I can be your backup. Let's put the deadline for your message at 20:00 > German time on the 30th, then. This will give me a chance to submit in the > evening of the 30th - if I have to. > > Regards > Thomas ------------------------------------------------------------------------------ Learn how Oracle Real Application Clusters (RAC) One Node allows customers to consolidate database storage, standardize their database environment, and, should the need arise, upgrade to a full multi-node Oracle RAC database without downtime or disruption http://p.sf.net/sfu/oracle-sfdevnl _______________________________________________ RKWard-devel mailing list RKWard-devel@lists.sourceforge.net https://lists.sourceforge.net/lists/listinfo/rkward-devel