Reshad, Meta-note: Yahoo does terrible things for text/plain forms of its html. It squished all bullet items onto a single line. Yuck.
On Sun, Mar 02, 2025 at 05:31:32AM +0000, Reshad Rahman wrote: > Comments/questions/nits: > - There are still 2 instances of "stronger authentication" in the doc, see > my previous comment on -21 on the use of "stronger authentication". Should > this instead be "strong authentication". e.g. Section 1.3 has "with a > stronger authentication", should that be "with strong authentication"? I'll make those changes. > - Section 3 "an less computationally intensive" -> "a less computationally > intensive" This will be fixed. > - Section 4 2nd paragraph: in "using the strong authentication for an > interval", are we missing "mode" or "method" after "strong authentication"? Mode is appropriate here. > - Please add Qiufang and Stephen who did the YD and SECDIR reviews > respectively. AFAIK there's no requirement to do so, but I believe it's good > form. I've added an acknolwedgments section. -- Jeff
