Hi,

Please find below some comments on the draft, mainly based on ID nits:

Section 11.2.1 describes a computation algorithm. Moving this section to draft-ietf-rtgwg-mrt-frr-algorithm may be considered.

** The abstract seems to contain reference RFC5286, which it shouldn't. Please replace those with straight textual mentions of the documents in question.
** Downref: Normative reference to an Informational RFC: RFC 5714
-- Unused Reference: RFC2328
-- Obsolete informational reference (is this intentional?): RFC 3137 (Obsoleted by RFC 6987) == Outdated reference: draft-ietf-rtgwg-ipfrr-notvia-addresses has been published as RFC 6981 == Outdated reference: draft-ietf-rtgwg-ordered-fib has been published as RFC 6976

Best regards,
Janos

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