Reviewer: Linda Dunbar Review result: Ready with Nits/Comments I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments.
For more information, please see the FAQ at <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-rtgwg-yang-vrrp-07 Reviewer: Linda Dunbar Review Date: 2017-12-04 IETF LC End Date: 2017-12-12 IESG Telechat date: 2018-01-11 Summary: Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: It would be helpful to add description on why you need both Tracking Interface and Tracking network. Both of them have the same description "to detect interface connectivity failures". What kind of "connectivity failures" will be reported over the "Tracking Interface"? what connectivity failures will be reported to "Tracking Network"? Thanks, Linda Dunbar _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art _______________________________________________ rtgwg mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/rtgwg
