Linda, thanks for your review. Authors, thanks for your responses. I have entered a No Objection ballot.
Alissa > On Dec 15, 2017, at 10:02 PM, Xufeng Liu <[email protected]> wrote: > > Hi Linda, > > Thanks for the review. We have added some descriptions as you suggested, and > posted an updated version of the draft > https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-rtgwg-yang-vrrp-08. > > Thanks, > - Xufeng > >> -----Original Message----- >> From: Linda Dunbar [mailto:[email protected]] >> Sent: Monday, December 4, 2017 6:25 PM >> To: [email protected] >> Cc: [email protected]; [email protected]; [email protected] >> Subject: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-rtgwg-yang-vrrp-07 >> >> >> Reviewer: Linda Dunbar >> Review result: Ready with Nits/Comments >> >> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review >> Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the >> IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call >> comments. >> >> For more information, please see the FAQ at >> >> <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. >> >> Document: draft-ietf-rtgwg-yang-vrrp-07 >> Reviewer: Linda Dunbar >> Review Date: 2017-12-04 >> IETF LC End Date: 2017-12-12 >> IESG Telechat date: 2018-01-11 >> >> Summary: >> >> Major issues: None >> >> Minor issues: None >> >> Nits/editorial comments: It would be helpful to add description on why you >> need >> both Tracking Interface and Tracking network. Both of them have the same >> description "to detect interface connectivity failures". What kind of >> "connectivity failures" will be reported over the "Tracking Interface"? what >> connectivity failures will be reported to "Tracking Network"? >> >> Thanks, Linda Dunbar >> >> _______________________________________________ >> Gen-art mailing list >> [email protected] >> https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art > > _______________________________________________ > Gen-art mailing list > [email protected] > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art _______________________________________________ rtgwg mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/rtgwg
