Rob Good to see my comments addressed.
While you are at it - YANG module copyright is 2016 which will get fixed but makes me notice .... - Security Considerations is not the current template; should have Normative References to SSH and TLS - s5.1 has draft [I-D.ietf-netmod-rfc7277bis]). which is now an RFC - IANA Considerations references RFC7950. As I learnt lately, RFC6020 is better here as all RFC7950 does is point you to RFC6020 - "MAC address in the format of H-H-H, in which H is a hexadecimal number of 1 to 4 bits."; If H has a maximum of 4 bits, then you have a 12 bit address, not quite the MAC I see these days! I wonder if it is better to leave this out and let readers refer to RFC6991. Tom Petch ----- Original Message ----- From: "Robert Wilton" <[email protected]> To: <[email protected]> Sent: Friday, August 24, 2018 6:17 PM > The -01 version fixes some of the comments raised during WG adoption, > but further work is in progress to improve the language, so expect a > properly updated version before the IETF 103. > > Thanks, > Rob > > On 24/08/2018 18:13, [email protected] wrote: > > A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories. > > This draft is a work item of the Routing Area Working Group WG of the IETF. > > > > Title : YANG Data Model for ARP > > Authors : Feng Zheng > > Bo Wu > > Robert Wilton > > Xiaojian Ding > > Filename : draft-ietf-rtgwg-arp-yang-model-01.txt > > Pages : 17 > > Date : 2018-08-24 > > > > Abstract: > > This document defines a YANG data model for the management of the > > Address Resolution Protocol (ARP). It extends the basic ARP > > functionality contained in the ietf-ip YANG data model, defined in > > RFC 8344, to provide management of optional ARP features and > > statistics. > > > > The YANG data model in this document conforms to the Network > > Management Datastore Architecture defined in RFC 8342. > > > > > > The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is: > > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-rtgwg-arp-yang-model/ > > > > There are also htmlized versions available at: > > https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-rtgwg-arp-yang-model-01 > > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-rtgwg-arp-yang-model-01 > > > > A diff from the previous version is available at: > > https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-rtgwg-arp-yang-model-01 > > > > > > Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of submission > > until the htmlized version and diff are available at tools.ietf.org. > > > > Internet-Drafts are also available by anonymous FTP at: > > ftp://ftp.ietf.org/internet-drafts/ > > > > _______________________________________________ > > rtgwg mailing list > > [email protected] > > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/rtgwg > > . > > > > _______________________________________________ > rtgwg mailing list > [email protected] > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/rtgwg _______________________________________________ rtgwg mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/rtgwg
