Tom,
Thanks for these comments, we will also address these in the next version.
On 31/08/2018 17:59, tom petch wrote:
Rob
Good to see my comments addressed.
While you are at it
- YANG module copyright is 2016 which will get fixed but makes me notice
....
- Security Considerations is not the current template; should have
Normative References to SSH and TLS
- s5.1 has
draft [I-D.ietf-netmod-rfc7277bis]).
which is now an RFC
- IANA Considerations references RFC7950. As I learnt lately, RFC6020
is better here as all RFC7950 does is point you to RFC6020
-
"MAC address in the format of H-H-H, in which H is a
hexadecimal number of 1 to 4 bits.";
If H has a maximum of 4 bits, then you have a 12 bit address, not quite
the MAC I see these days!
Ah, yes, it was probably meant to say digits.
I wonder if it is better to leave this out
and let readers refer to RFC6991.
Quite probably, it seems generally better if things are only defined in
one place.
Thanks,
Rob
Tom Petch
----- Original Message -----
From: "Robert Wilton" <[email protected]>
To: <[email protected]>
Sent: Friday, August 24, 2018 6:17 PM
The -01 version fixes some of the comments raised during WG adoption,
but further work is in progress to improve the language, so expect a
properly updated version before the IETF 103.
Thanks,
Rob
On 24/08/2018 18:13, [email protected] wrote:
A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
directories.
This draft is a work item of the Routing Area Working Group WG of
the IETF.
Title : YANG Data Model for ARP
Authors : Feng Zheng
Bo Wu
Robert Wilton
Xiaojian Ding
Filename : draft-ietf-rtgwg-arp-yang-model-01.txt
Pages : 17
Date : 2018-08-24
Abstract:
This document defines a YANG data model for the management of
the
Address Resolution Protocol (ARP). It extends the basic ARP
functionality contained in the ietf-ip YANG data model, defined
in
RFC 8344, to provide management of optional ARP features and
statistics.
The YANG data model in this document conforms to the Network
Management Datastore Architecture defined in RFC 8342.
The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-rtgwg-arp-yang-model/
There are also htmlized versions available at:
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https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-rtgwg-arp-yang-model-01
A diff from the previous version is available at:
https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-rtgwg-arp-yang-model-01
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