First, it's a good idea to keep the default notebook page very well-polished. That's the first thing about Sage that many people see, so we should make it good.
On Thu, 28 Apr 2011 at 10:17AM +0100, Dr. David Kirkby wrote: > 1) I was always taught that if you list items, you don't put a comma > before the last "and". i.e. one should write > > A, B, C and D. > > and not > > A, B, C, and D. > > but this page seems to break that rule on many occasions. "I'd like to thank my parents, Ayn Rand and God." It may be a rule, but it's not always a very good idea. We should pick a style and be consistent, so long as the meaning is not obscured. > 2) If one installs the notebook, there's a fair amount of help available in > > http://localhost:8000/help/ > > but there's no link to that from the homepage. In fact, it can't be > seen until someone logs in. > > IMHO, there should be a link to the help page even if one is not > logged in and it should be available even if one is not logged in. That's a good idea. > 3) Section "Use an Open Source Alternative" > > I think "mathematics packages" would sound better than "math > packages". "Mathematics packages" would also sound better to those would might write "maths packages"... Your suggestions 4 through 8 also sound very good. Make a ticket and put up a patch. Dan -- --- Dan Drake ----- http://mathsci.kaist.ac.kr/~drake -------
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