> What is the argument for removing the tour? I have seen absolutely no > arguments at for removing it, except maybe "the first section of that manual > is also named "A guided tour".' That's not a compelling argument. A > piece of our documentation has a target audience (or audience) and a goal > about what it should accomplish for them. The tour presumably has as a > target audience people who want to learn something about sage, probably > interactively, in about 10 minutes. And it's aimed at people who have > never used Sage before.
Please William, do not be so defensive. I am not your enemy, I am not Sage's enemy, and I spent my whole week-end writing doc patches [1]. I only want to improve our documentation, for all users. Here is the reason why I believe that this document is not something we want to show to the users [2] - It is entitled "A tour of Sage", and it does not (at all) give an overview of what Sage does (and makes it a perfect tool in some fields) - It only shows basic things that you can do with one thousand other softwares - It looks unfinished: look at the bottom of the page. Please look at it. Here is why I think that it is advertised at the wrong place: - It appears at the root of all our documentation [3], on the same level as the developer's manual, the reference manual, or the actual 'tutorial' (thematic or not) - If you do not know better, you could honestly believe that this 'Tour of Sage' is the only documentation we have for very very new users Why I think that we should remove it: - You witnessed that plenty of our documentation is outdated. We cannot keep and maintain all this doc. We need to have fewer documents, we cannot do it otherwise. - We cannot make a document update itself, and we cannot order anybody to do it. If we keep it, it will stay as it is for a long time (since Mike Hansen wrote it in 2009, only broken doctests have been changed). If you refuse to see it removed [4], I believe that it should be turned into a sub-document of the tutorial. Under a different name. Something like 'A 5-minutes overview of Sage'. I honestly believe that it would be a pity to not remove it. Some short document, at this entry level, is indeed needed but this page alone is bad work. Let us remove it, and re-do it from scratch later. This document does not help us: in its current state, new users should rather consult the 'tutorial' document (and its table of contents, for a quick overview). Nathann P.S.: I need help to review the trac tickets from [1]. This is only documentation to review, it is easy, but I need those ticket to be reviewed before I can write more. [1] http://trac.sagemath.org/query?status=needs_review&component=documentation&col=id&col=summary&col=status&col=type&col=priority&col=milestone&col=component&order=priority [2] http://www.sagemath.org/doc/a_tour_of_sage/index.html [3] http://www.sagemath.org/doc/index.html [4] I am powerless against that. The same way that in the review process the reviewer is all-powerful, and the author can only obey if he wants his patch to pass. -- You received this message because you are subscribed to the Google Groups "sage-devel" group. To unsubscribe from this group and stop receiving emails from it, send an email to sage-devel+unsubscr...@googlegroups.com. To post to this group, send email to sage-devel@googlegroups.com. Visit this group at http://groups.google.com/group/sage-devel. For more options, visit https://groups.google.com/d/optout.