> I had a quick look at the intro, which is quite nice.  

Thanks.

> * Under "What is Sage": "take" should be "taken"

Ah, good catch

> * one should also avoid using "i" and "I" as variables for the same
>  obvious reason as for "e"

Yes, very good point.  I add that, too.

> * just a comment: I never used del(); in fact, I didn't know it existed
>  before reading your intro (thanks!); I normally just define f to be
>  the next thing I'm interested in.  Actually, I don't know how to get
>  information about del() in Sage; trying del? is not successful.

I borrowed this idea from one of the people that I credit at the bottom.

> * when I get to plot(1/t, ...) I get a NameError because t has not yet
>  been defined; did you do this on purpose to get them to fix it?

No, that wasn't on purpose.  Thanks.

> * for "Divisibility of integers", you can also do something like
>    q, r = 4357.quo_rem(3754)
>  and get the quotient and the remainder in one go.

This is news to me and useful to know.

> * in "Extended gcd", I think saying "*the* values of r and s" might
>  mislead people into thinking that these values are uniquely
>  determined; I would drop the "the".

Good suggestion.

Thanks for taking the time to look it over.  I'll make these changes now.

Dana

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