#3573: [with patch, with spkg, needs review] finance - Implementation of Sage
interface to opentick
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 Reporter:  cswiercz            |        Owner:  cswiercz    
     Type:  enhancement         |       Status:  assigned    
 Priority:  major               |    Milestone:  sage-feature
Component:  finance             |   Resolution:              
 Keywords:  finance, opentick,  |  
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Comment (by mvngu):

 For the documentation in the patch {{{sage-3573-opentick2.patch}}}, here
 are some possible fixes to typos:

 1. The word "minutely" is usually associated with considering something in
 close details. The expression "by minute" (or something similar) more
 accurately describes a time interval.
 {{{
 -data on a variety of time intervals: hourly, minutely, or even
 +data on a variety of time intervals: hourly, by minute, or even
 }}}
 [[BR]]
 2. Again, a similar comment to that in 1. applies here. I would use "by
 second" or something similar, but not "secondly", which hardly describes a
 time interval.
 {{{
 -hourly, minutely, and even secondly. To enable use of opentick, enter
 +hourly, by minute, and even by second. To enable use of opentick, enter
 }}}
 [[BR]]
 3. Again, a similar comment to that in 2. applies here.
 {{{
 -to obtain data on an hourly, minutely, or even secondly rate. This
 +to obtain data on an hourly rate, or by minute, or even by second. This
 }}}
 [[BR]]
 4.
 {{{
 -enddate are \code{datetime.date} objects. Retreives data using the
 +enddate are \code{datetime.date} objects. Retrieves data using the
 }}}
 [[BR]]
 5.
 {{{
 -Return string representation of Opentick interface.
 +Return a string representation of Opentick interface.
 }}}
 [[BR]]
 6.
 {{{
 -in once of the following two formats where the time
 +in one of the following two formats where the time
 }}}
 [[BR]]
 7.
 {{{
 -Where 'Mon' is the first three letters of the coressponding month.
 +where 'Mon' is the first three letters of the corresponding month.
 }}}
 [[BR]]
 Disclaimer: I'm an Australian, so maybe my suggestions don't make sense.

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