#14090: Thematic tutorials: using the notebook, programming python, 
comprehensions
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       Reporter:  nthiery                                                    |  
       Owner:  mvngu                                                
           Type:  enhancement                                                |  
      Status:  needs_work                                           
       Priority:  major                                                      |  
   Milestone:  sage-5.8                                             
      Component:  documentation                                              |  
  Resolution:                                                       
       Keywords:  thematic tutorials                                         |  
 Work issues:                                                       
Report Upstream:  N/A                                                        |  
   Reviewers:  Samuel Lelièvre, Sébastien Labbé, Karl-Dieter Crisman
        Authors:  Franco Saliola, Florent Hivert, Nicolas M. Thiéry, et al.  |  
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Comment (by nthiery):

 Replying to [comment:19 kcrisman]:
 > Front page:
 >  * I figured out the different typefaces - it's the different types of
 links.  Italics only for Sphinx links.  I don't know whether this is worth
 fixing - after #6495 it should be easy.  The :class: link probably should
 be different, though.

 Agreed, this is ugly. But it's about style and not content. So yes,
 that should be for another ticket.

 >  * I'm torn between putting the programming ones immediately after the
 intro ones or having them where they are.  What do you think?

 I just added a link from the intro to the programming tutorials.

 >  * Modeling Mathematics - that could be very confusing.  I'd use a word
 other than "modeling", as that means something very different to most
 people.

 I see the potential confusion. Yet I am strongly attached to the word
 Modeling, because that's really what we are doing (in the sense of
 http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Object-oriented_modeling, though we don't
 necessarily have to use only object-oriented techniques). I changed
 the title to "Modeling Mathematics on a computer". Is this better?


 >  * If you want to add even more things, please finish the review of the
 Quickstarts at #13381!

 :-)

 This sounds nice! I'll try to have a more detailed look! For now I'll
 focus on getting those in before they rot away.

 > The introductory tutorial:
 >  * "If you are browsing this document as a static web page, " - probably
 add something here that the active instructions assume that you are
 browsing it live.  That's implicit, but explicit is better than implicit,
 according to Python...

 >  * "mathematics like this sin(x)-y3 by using dollar signs" - maybe one
 should have \sin or something?  The "sin" shouldn't be italicized.

 The \ is there in the .rst file.

 >  * "Still, it is possible to define symbolic functions without first
 defining its variables:"  - "their variables", maybe
 >  * "colour it red" - I don't know whether US English is the Sage
 standard.  If it is, make it "color" :-)

 I think it is.

 > Patchbot is giving this a green light, so I'd say fix the (mostly very
 minor) things I pointed out and you've got a nice upgrade to the Sage
 documentation on your hands!

 :-)

 Thanks again for the review!

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