#19891: improve coding style and documentation in projective schemes
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       Reporter:  bhutz              |        Owner:  bhutz
           Type:  enhancement        |       Status:  new
       Priority:  trivial            |    Milestone:  sage-7.0
      Component:  algebraic          |   Resolution:
  geometry                           |    Merged in:
       Keywords:                     |    Reviewers:  Frédéric Chapoton
        Authors:                     |  Work issues:
Report Upstream:  N/A                |       Commit:
         Branch:                     |  7aac718894d13b8f52373ec0f38d080dca3ed162
  u/bhutz/ticket/19891               |     Stopgaps:
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Changes (by chapoton):

 * commit:   => 7aac718894d13b8f52373ec0f38d080dca3ed162
 * reviewer:   => Frédéric Chapoton


Comment:

 Please put this ticket in "needs_review". I have assumed that you forgot
 to do so.
 Here are some points that I have seen at first reading.

 {{{
 +    See [Hutz-gr]
 }}}
 is wrong. The correct refererence syntax is {{{[Hutz-gr]_}}} with an
 underscore at the end. This happen at many places, for example also for
 `See [FMV]` and `[Silverman_ADS]` and `[Bruin-Molnar] and [Molnar]`.

 {{{
 `PGL(2,QQ)`
 }}}
 could be
 {{{
 `PGL(2,\QQ)`
 }}}

 This looks strange:
 {{{
 -        lift,lifted = blift(LG,Li,p,S=S)
 +        lift,lifted = blift(LG,Li,p,S = S)
 }}}

 {{{Abelian variety}}} should keep its capital A

 {{{
 +        returns ``True`` if this map is a morphism.
 }}}
 should be
 {{{
 +        Return ``True`` if this map is a morphism.
 }}}

 {{{greens function}}} should be {{{Green's function}}}

 {{{+        THis map must}}}
 should be
 {{{+        This map must}}}

 typo {{{the subsgroup}}} at least twice

 typo {{{post-critially}}}

 typo {{{the the LLL}}}

 duplicate reference {{{[Hutz_gr]}}} and {{{[Hutz-gr]}}} ?

 typo {{{this projective spaces}}}
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 New commits:
 
||[http://git.sagemath.org/sage.git/commit/?id=0db500bd8c542990f74defe63f2eaac1afa23697
 0db500b]||{{{19891: fixes for endPN_minimal_model.py}}}||
 
||[http://git.sagemath.org/sage.git/commit/?id=9fcac6792f0c1fe83f43b688f86279f99c191ae5
 9fcac67]||{{{19891: fixes for projective_homset.py}}}||
 
||[http://git.sagemath.org/sage.git/commit/?id=293dd6cb6193237065010365475eeabc18363380
 293dd6c]||{{{19891: fixes for endPN_automorphism_group.py}}}||
 
||[http://git.sagemath.org/sage.git/commit/?id=069751e699adf48521a2697f636ef1b41676a877
 069751e]||{{{19891: fixes for projective_morphism.py}}}||
 
||[http://git.sagemath.org/sage.git/commit/?id=8c073bc82a5dc2e7184b83e4939eea4a3cb0e953
 8c073bc]||{{{19891: fixes for projective_morphism_help.py and update
 references}}}||
 
||[http://git.sagemath.org/sage.git/commit/?id=d90476d0af5beada24e828b3d3f01a63ec40d575
 d90476d]||{{{19891 fixes for projective_point.py}}}||
 
||[http://git.sagemath.org/sage.git/commit/?id=935c0ec0e7b994d4d8e908654b362503dbbe4bfb
 935c0ec]||{{{19891: fixes for projective_rational_point.py}}}||
 
||[http://git.sagemath.org/sage.git/commit/?id=ce4dac1592ee7e09835c3fa598f4f36f1020ec7d
 ce4dac1]||{{{19891: fixes for projective_space.py}}}||
 
||[http://git.sagemath.org/sage.git/commit/?id=7aac718894d13b8f52373ec0f38d080dca3ed162
 7aac718]||{{{19891: doc formatting clean-up}}}||

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