#12042: Update the documentation how to use the VM image, especially to avoid
confusion about Virtualbox and VM Player
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Reporter: emil | Owner: schilly
Type: defect | Status: needs_review
Priority: major | Milestone: sage-5.0
Component: website/wiki | Keywords: VM images Virtualbox VMware
documentation networking NAT Bridged IP adress localhost
Work_issues: | Upstream: N/A
Reviewer: Marco Streng | Author: Emil Widmann
Merged: | Dependencies:
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Changes (by newvalueoldvalue):
* reviewer: => Marco Streng
* author: => Emil Widmann
Comment:
The example html file looks good, huge improvement. Some suggestions:
"downloaded ''ova image'' of Sage" --> "Sage ".ova" file that you can
download on the Sage download page". (may be easier to understand for
average Windows user)
"current VirtualBox Image" --> "Sage VirtualBox installation" (may be
easier to understand for average Windows user)
"and contains" --> ", which contains" (too many "and"s)
"In developement: Help efforts for a": depelopment has only 3 e's, I don't
know what "Help efforts for a" means, perhaps just remove these 4 words?
Suggested change to [http://sagemath.org/download.html] is very good.
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