#11599: Wrap fan morphism in toric morphism
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   Reporter:  vbraun              |          Owner:  AlexGhitza  
       Type:  enhancement         |         Status:  needs_work  
   Priority:  major               |      Milestone:  sage-5.0    
  Component:  algebraic geometry  |       Keywords:              
Work_issues:                      |       Upstream:  N/A         
   Reviewer:  Andrey Novoseltsev  |         Author:  Volker Braun
     Merged:                      |   Dependencies:              
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Changes (by novoselt):

  * status:  needs_review => needs_work


Comment:

 For the last patch:

  1. In `schemes.rst` extra trailing spaces are added to one line (which I
 think was recently prohibited ;-)) and `toric_morphism` is added twice -
 probably it should be only once?
  2. In `scheme.py` it adds `cached_method`, but it was already imported,
 so this hunk should not be there.
  3. In `toric_homset.py`: I think that generic description should not be
 duplicated in the module docstring. On the other hand AUTHOURS, EXAMPLES
 and license sections should be added.
  4. `__init__` in the beginning does not have a docstring at all. It would
 be nice also to add some clarifying comment what exactly is achieved by
 `register_conversion` there (although maybe I am supposed to know
 that?...)
  5. In the example of `_element_constructor_` can we please not use `Hom`
 as the name for `dP8.Hom(P2)`? `Hom` is a top-level function and
 overwriting it is a bit confusing, especially since the example is quite
 long. How about just `H` instead?
  6. In `_repr_defn` of toric morphism lines like "Defined by sending the
 Rational polyhedral fan in 2-d lattice N to Rational polyhedral fan in 1-d
 lattice N." are constructed. "the" in front of domain but not codomain is
 a bit strange and I think we should remove it since fans are capitalized.
 Or put it in both places, but it makes strings longer ;-)
  7. In `_homset_class` of `toric_variety.py` the old doctest is deleted
 and it is actually no longer working. Without direct calls to private
 functions, `H([z0, z1, z0, z3])` is also not working, which bugs me quite
 a bit. The traceback goes to `NotImplementedError` and includes
 `Set_generic.__call__` which I have complained a bit in
 http://trac.sagemath.org/sage_trac/ticket/11599#comment:30.

 These are all the comments that I have, will upload new reviewer patch
 shortly.

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