Thomas Z. wrote: > Please, feel free to tell me what do you think about it!
This is a very promising flyer. Thanks for your efforts. There are some grammar mistakes and typographical no-nos that need to be fixed in order for the flyer to appear as professional as it needs to be. On the first page, "More Information and Downloads," it should be The Logos of Scribus's Friends instead of The Logo's of Scribus' Friends An error like that would put me off right away.<g> And I'm not the only one, I assure you. It should be Scribus's Friends at the top of the left column, not Scribus' Friends I wonder if you could include URLs for the friends. That would be helpful to the readers. There are several things that need fixing on page 2. I'll simply move through the text from the top. * What is Scribus? and Why Scribus? don't belong in the top band because the text directly under "Why Scribus?" does not tell us why we should use Scribus. Perhaps if you moved the two lines at the bottom of column one to the top of column two you could leave What is Scribus? and Why Scribus? in the top band. You have plenty of room to do this if you reduced the size of the pen in the bottom right somewhat. * There is no need to hyphenate Linux in "Open Source Desktop etc." Just move the whole word to the next line. In any case the hyphenation is incorrect because the word is pronounced LIN-uks in English, not LINE-uks. Hyphenated, the word is Lin-ux. But I wouldn't hyphenate it here. * It should be Mac OS X, not MacOSX. * Please use curly quotes! * Calle d by Ne w s forge , "..one of th e k ille r applications for Linux",
