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Sorry! Judy Miner > Thomas Z. wrote: >> Please, feel free to tell me what do you think about it! > > This is a very promising flyer. Thanks for your efforts. > > There are some grammar mistakes and typographical no-nos that need > to be fixed in order for the flyer to appear as professional as it > needs to be. On the first page, "More Information and Downloads," it > should be > The Logos of Scribus's Friends > instead of > The Logo's of Scribus' Friends > > An error like that would put me off right away.<g> And I'm not the > only one, I assure you. > > It should be > Scribus's Friends > at the top of the left column, not > Scribus' Friends > > I wonder if you could include URLs for the friends. That would be > helpful to the readers. > > There are several things that need fixing on page 2. I'll simply > move through the text from the top. > * What is Scribus? > and > Why Scribus? > don't belong in the top band because the text directly under "Why > Scribus?" does not tell us why we should use Scribus. Perhaps if you > moved the two lines at the bottom of column one to the top of column > two you could leave What is Scribus? and Why Scribus? in the top > band. You have plenty of room to do this if you reduced the size of > the pen in the bottom right somewhat. > > * There is no need to hyphenate Linux in "Open Source Desktop > etc." Just move the whole word to the next line. In any case the > hyphenation is incorrect because the word is pronounced LIN-uks in > English, not LINE-uks. Hyphenated, the word is Lin-ux. But I > wouldn't hyphenate it here. > > * It should be Mac OS X, not MacOSX. > > * Please use curly quotes! > > * Calle d by > Ne w s forge , > "..one of th e > k ille r applications > for Linux", > > > _______________________________________________ > Scribus mailing list > Scribus at nashi.altmuehlnet.de > http://nashi.altmuehlnet.de/mailman/listinfo/scribus > Registered Linux User #397786
