Re: [Anima] I-D Action: draft-ietf-anima-brski-cloud-08.txt
Thanks for making the updates to the text! I did see that the numbering for the References section seems to have disappeared; and there is one mention of "MUST never" that ought to be "MUST NOT". Ok for me to conclude WGLC and the draft can now move forward. Esko -Original Message- From: Anima On Behalf Of Michael Richardson Sent: Thursday, August 24, 2023 17:38 To: anima@ietf.org Subject: Re: [Anima] I-D Action: draft-ietf-anima-brski-cloud-08.txt internet-dra...@ietf.org wrote: > A diff from the previous version is available at: > https://author-tools.ietf.org/iddiff?url2=draft-ietf-anima-brski-cloud-08 This is the result of WGLC review comments from Esko (THANK YOU!) There are no semantic changes to the document, just edits for consistency. Is the WGLC finished then? -- Michael Richardson. o O ( IPv6 IøT consulting ) Sandelman Software Works Inc, Ottawa and Worldwide ___ Anima mailing list Anima@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/anima
Re: [Anima] I-D Action: draft-ietf-anima-brski-cloud-08.txt
internet-dra...@ietf.org wrote: > A diff from the previous version is available at: > https://author-tools.ietf.org/iddiff?url2=draft-ietf-anima-brski-cloud-08 This is the result of WGLC review comments from Esko (THANK YOU!) There are no semantic changes to the document, just edits for consistency. Is the WGLC finished then? -- Michael Richardson. o O ( IPv6 IøT consulting ) Sandelman Software Works Inc, Ottawa and Worldwide signature.asc Description: PGP signature ___ Anima mailing list Anima@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/anima
[Anima] I-D Action: draft-ietf-anima-brski-cloud-08.txt
A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories. This Internet-Draft is a work item of the Autonomic Networking Integrated Model and Approach (ANIMA) WG of the IETF. Title : BRSKI Cloud Registrar Authors : Owen Friel Rifaat Shekh-Yusef Michael Richardson Filename: draft-ietf-anima-brski-cloud-08.txt Pages : 21 Date: 2023-08-24 Abstract: Bootstrapping Remote Secure Key Infrastructures defines how to onboard a device securely into an operator maintained infrastructure. It assumes that there is local network infrastructure for the device to discover and to help the device. This document extends the new device behaviour so that if no local infrastructure is available, such as in a home or remote office, that the device can use a well defined "call-home" mechanism to find the operator maintained infrastructure. To this, this document defines how to contact a well-known Cloud Registrar, and two ways in which the new device may be redirected towards the operator maintained infrastructure. The IETF datatracker status page for this Internet-Draft is: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-anima-brski-cloud/ There is also an HTML version available at: https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-ietf-anima-brski-cloud-08.html A diff from the previous version is available at: https://author-tools.ietf.org/iddiff?url2=draft-ietf-anima-brski-cloud-08 Internet-Drafts are also available by rsync at rsync.ietf.org::internet-drafts ___ Anima mailing list Anima@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/anima
